I don't think JTW checks this anymore. Anyways i think that you need to work on your lighting the most Make My Day. It wasn't a very good render though I have to admit. Other than lighting you need to work on colour-coordination. I suggest looking at the colour wheel and looking at primary colours, secondary colours, and complimentary colours etc. It may seem a bit childish, but its is a really useful thing to look at, especially for beginners. I've seen you make much better stuff. You just need to work on maintaining some consistency. Go look up some tuts on what I have said or PM me or Kyle for some help or something or add me on msn . This is also directed at any other beginners that see this.