One of my facebook friends, who I used to go to school with, wrote this freestyle...
Now, to me it sounds like he is trying to be the white boy hopsin.. I heard him freestyle a few, he even rapped some of his songs at our Prom last year..
anyway, this is probably the best recent freestyle he wrote on facebook.. Right now it only has 16 likes.
Anyway, tell me what you think, I think he did a pretty good job. someone asked him "are you going to put this on youtube" he said "no, I will rewrite it to make it better, and then add more to it then put a lyrics onto it and try to seperate the parts and then add a beat", to me sounds like he knows how to do rap music.

http://i.imgur.com/xDes7.png

also, someone take off the dang attachment... :|