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    The Fallen

    The original poem was 13 stanzas... but I didn't want to bore you
    This is the condensed version:

    The Fallen

    From sky we fell
    From sky we flew
    Now on this land
    We start anew
    The wreaths that shone
    Upon our heads
    Have lost their light
    And now are dead

    In sky we lived
    In sky we loved
    But now we lay
    Alone... Unloved
    Our once pure hearts
    Are dark and cold
    But we still dream
    Of our land of old

    When sky was dark
    When night had come
    We felt alive
    We lived as one
    But we are lost
    We laugh no more
    We're damned to search
    This cursed shore

    We have fallen
    We are exiled
    We are lost...
    But we are free
    It's about fallen angels if you haven't noticed. It's my theme for the next few weeks... or years. I have a picture I'm working on in Photoshop, but it's not ready yet. I'm going to use it for a sig.

    Thanks for reading! (Credits to me)

    P.S. The last four lines aren't supposed to follow the rhyme scheme. I put them in as a sort of epilogue.

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    It's a poem... not a punk song.
    READ THE POST. "This is a POEM I wrote..."

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