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    My Happiest Day

    Hands united, breathing erratic, the cold sinking through our clothes.
    “Let’s stop here”- He says, “Ok, but its cooold” was my response.
    “I haven’t noticed, you make my entire body warm with just the touch of your hand”
    Blood rushes to my cheeks, butterflies take flight inside.
    Suddenly the scene breaks in, him on bended knee,
    He leans in, holds my hand, and in that moment my legs went weak.
    My heart knew what my mind had yet to grasp,
    My only thought, embrace the man below,
    we tumbled, rolled, laughed and I spoke.
    “Si!, Yes!, many times over yes!”
    He looked at me, snow in his brow,
    “Just to be clear, and so there’s no doubt, Bella, Will you marry me?”
    My brain collapsed, my throat closed, and all I could muster was a nod
    after a few seconds, of complete bliss, I felt the need
    my sense of humor taking the best of me “Duh!” was all I could speak.
    Laughter, joy, smiles, snow from above, fate.
    My day, my happiest day, The day when the rest of my life took shape.


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    Loved it the first time.
    Still loving it now.

    Glad you did it. It's real good ;]

    But you already knew how I felt about it :P

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    Thank you, I wasn't sure if to post it here or not. But now I'm glad i did


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    I didn't really think it'd be something you'd want to post either, but soon you'll see why I was right
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    How Long Does It Take You to Write a Poem?
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    depends, if im in the mood to write, at most 10 mins, if im not, hours.


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    “Si!, Yes!, many times over yes!”

    is that from that movie, what's it called... love actually ?

    IDK I think that's where it reminds me of :S

    Poem was nice btw, did you write that when it happened or just now?

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    no, today, its basically the story shaped into a poem, and now i want to see that movie, but ive never seen it.


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    I'm not sure if that's the movie which I remember it from, but I swear I've heard that before. hmmmmm

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    never heard it in a movie, but anyway, no movie there. that's actually what i said.


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    Its gives you that warm and fuzzy feeling.
    I'm liking your happy poems Liz.

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    Wow Liz, you are a beautiful writer! You should write more poems for us. Everyone enjoyes reading them! Once again, great job Liz. You could write poetry for a living if you really wanted to lol.
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