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    Ambedo

     
    (n.) a kind of melancholic trance in which you become completely absorbed in vivid sensory details—raindrops skittering down a window, tall trees leaning in the wind, clouds of cream swirling in your coffee—which leads to a dawning awareness of the haunting fragility of life, a mood whose only known cure is the vuvuzela.




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    Erh @HalfBajan I always forget bout u m9999
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    Pretty cool

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    Ok so lets begin:
    The signature is good. I like the fact that apart black and white, you focused on not more than 2 colors. Good. Yellow and light blue mix good.
    The problem starts in the stroke ( I mean, the edges are too pixelated, something that could be solved by smudging slowly on the outline, and paste a duplicate of the original render on top, or simply by selecting the outline, feathering like 5-10 pixels, and cuting the excess.) Much better that way.

    The sphere on the bottom right corner feels a bit out of context, since it's too bright and it catches a lot of attention from the main render in the middle.
    If I'm not mistaken, you placed a light blue layer on top and mixed with the rest on Hard Light settings rigth? I think that's the main reason the pixels are way too visible.

    Overall it's a great work, so I think it deserves a rate of 8/10 at least. Pleasant color scheme helps a lot.
    Keep it up.
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    can i see the general pic...?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lara Coraline View Post
    can i see the general pic...?
    You mean?? Lol
    I made this

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post

    You mean?? Lol
    I made this
    how much resources did u use?
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    I am not a huge fan of the scattered background tbh.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lara Coraline View Post
    how much resources did u use?
    Like 25+
    /charlim

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    I'll make a list

    Good~
    I like the colors you used
    The blending is good
    bg looks good
    render placement, along with the colors are good
    actual brightness of the color suits the piece well

    Bad~
    Some C4D parts or "fragments" looks misplaced and generally cluttered
    The color on the thumb is too bright
    the blue on the top left compared to bottom right are not the same
    the bottom right isn't blended much with the whole yellow/blue (this is opinion based of course, depends on what you want honestly).
    My overall take on the piece:
    It is a good piece of art, it's clear you put some decent time and effort into it and it looks great as a finished product. 8.5/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    Like 25+
    /charlim
    aha that why the art that good
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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post
    Erh @HalfBajan I always forget bout u m9999
    sorri
    I'd love to be able to give CC but I have no clue about sigs and this type of art my friend!
    Looks pretty mad though





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    Sick job! keep it going!

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