Been working on these for a while, decided it was time to post. Hmu with CnC
This one was a collab with me and my bud cirolo, cnc appreciated.
This one was all me, cnc also appreciated.
I highly recommend if you could add a texture over the signature to give it a better aspect.
On the first one, you should blur the blue background, the closer to the center the less blur, so that you focus more on the main render.
The second signature has too many colors, and Laxus edges definitely do not blend, making it look like it's just a render pasted on the image.
The background is good(apart too many colors as I said.)
My final tip is: What you did with the 1st signature, do with the 2nd one. And work with the baground of the 1st signature like you did with the 2nd one (with more twists and stuff).
Overall 1st - 6/10 2nd - 7,3/10
Keep at it!
Formerly known as gamer4evere
MPGH GAMING NIGHT 08/03/2015 - Town of Salem
The first one looks quite sharpened in places
The fractals I think you used are too bright or the color isn't right
The text ruins it completely, never use text till you've mastered everything else then work on how to use text.
I can't even do it x.x
They both lack depth and detail
The 2nd one seems to be basic imo
No offense thou it just comes off as a BG and FG render
No offense pls