This one is a flop imo.
First, you repeated (again...) the mistake of submerging the focal point (a render in this case) into many other chaotic components.
Second, the colors are sharp (too sharp as well in some areas, such as bottom left and top right), very bright and with a little transition between darkness and brightness. Essentially lighting is composed of colored bright stains. Which is bad.
In this one, the depth is kind of screwed up as well: after finally noticing there's someone pointing his/her hand at me, there are quite a few parts of the image whose depth is hard to understand.
For example, the yellow disk at the bottom left of the image, or the whole top right part of the image.
Of course, the background is blurred so it's clear it's behind everything, but the other parts tend to get mixed way too much.
The only thing i actually like are the particles at the bottom right corner...the, yknow, little blue dots and blurred yellow stripes...
In short: many places are over sharpened, the color is not well distributed by using very bright color stains, depth is hard to understand unless i stare at the image for a prolonged amount of time and the focal point is immersed with extraneous components.
Plus, something that is completely unrelated to the artwork you've made, i'm a tad tired of being mentioned left and right, i'm sure a few others are as well.
You really should work on how to behave with others, such as when someone criticizes poorly your work (we've seen it happen recently) or when you ask for advice on Skype (and you know what i'm talking about here).
Of course, anything i haven't mentioned is absolutely fine compared to your usual standards, which is why i haven't mentioned such things.