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    The sorrow

    The saddest of the year
    thou unrelenting past
    a flying word from here and there
    he came and took me by the hand
    and i shattered like made from glass

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    Short, no true rhyme, creative, my kind of poem!


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    dont really get the poem ,well i dont get how you managed to not make it ryhme even on how short it is ,but you know im one of those people that likes poems to ryhme so im not really a haiku fan if youve noticed but i guess it at least makes sense so ok job
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    Not long... Not kind of my poem... I like rhyming poems... Don't get ur poem either
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    Quote Originally Posted by ragesamuel View Post
    Not long... Not kind of my poem... I like rhyming poems... Don't get ur poem either
    Not all poems are meant to be understood. Some are just written to express emotions to force you to consider multiple meanings.

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    I like the author unban good poem!

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