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    Post Gett Yo Head

    This is composed by me... little help from my frend.... for checking it and fixing some words....
    its not tht gud yet....

    here we go;

    Been around since time began.
    U dejanew, if U 1 of the boys.
    No flash in the pan but the man with the plan.
    Fit 4 fight, if reason the weapon of choice.

    Broken dreams, broken rules – we're like a bad fever.
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    So stay on the grind till the break of dawn.

    Extreme solutions made us freaks 2 the core.
    For what we thought was H2O turned out to be H2SO4.
    We got scars 2 prove it, and one rule to win our war.
    What does not kill you makes you only do it more.

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    It's a helluva life, and someone else will pay.

    Homework whenever, friends 4ever.
    Big it up for grit and grinding gears.
    Talk is cheap; it's dumb to be clever.
    Spit in the wind you get wet behind the ears.

    Paper here, Paper there. Paper everywhere.
    You can write, wrap, or fold. Or make a bag.
    The only thing that counts is the message.
    We are the IndividualZ - each of us a dissenter.


    not tht gud rite??? not gud words.... but its my first... my frendz say its okay... but not well!!
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    I've never seen a rapper put chemical compounds in his rap. o_O

    Some parts don't go together. So lines don't fit tour style like you were tryin to act more gansta then you are, but some lines I liked a lot.
    Like spit in the wind and get wet behind the ears. That was clever.

    "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired signifies, in the final sense, a theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed. This world in arms is not spending money alone. It is spending the sweat of its laborers, the genius of its scientists, the hopes of its children. The cost of one modern heavy bomber is this: a modern brick school in more than 30 cities. It is two electric power plants, each serving a town of 60,000 population. It is two fine, fully equipped hospitals. It is some fifty miles of concrete pavement. We pay for a single fighter plane with a half million bushels of wheat. We pay for a single destroyer with new homes that could have housed more than 8,000 people. This is, I repeat, the best way of life to be found on the road the world has been taking. This is not a way of life at all, in any true sense. Under the cloud of threatening war, it is humanity hanging from a cross of iron."
    - Dwight D. Eisenhower

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    thx... im jst getting to know rap, cuz b4 i used to like rock and hardcoretal.
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    It was decent I guess.. Not really that great though.

    Keep goin' though, bud. I'm not into rap but I'm sure you have potential.
    Last edited by Scruffy; 01-11-2010 at 10:14 AM.

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    thx for the encouragement... ima do more
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    well if you would like i can help you rap and get better real fast and i will tell you if you have heart or not but so far i see somewhat ok but to predictable all the greatest rappers can have flow and be unpredeictable and have a message in their ryhmes and btw all rapper come from poets =)

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