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    guitarist



    all presets, c&c

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    • Nice background effects.
    • Good flow.
    • Decent lighting.
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    • Too monotone.
    • Lighting can be fixed.
    • Too sharp.
    • Too much blank space.

    Overall: It's a nice piece, but it could be done alot better.

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    Thank you for your honest opinion and very well done critique, I can definetly tell your no beginner. So thanks you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by August2007 View Post
    +'s
    • Nice background effects.
    • Good flow.
    • Decent lighting.
    -'s
    • Too monotone.
    • Lighting can be fixed.
    • Too sharp.
    • Too much blank space.

    Overall: It's a nice piece, but it could be done alot better.
    I really love your English, finally somebody with good grammar.

    The picture is nice but i think the text font doesnt quite fit with the picture.

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    Quote Originally Posted by FluffyStuff View Post
    I really love your English, finally somebody with good grammar.

    The picture is nice but i think the text font doesnt quite fit with the picture.
    What's wrong with my grammar?

    T.T

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    Quote Originally Posted by FluffyStuff View Post
    I really love your English, finally somebody with good grammar.

    The picture is nice but i think the text font doesn't quite fit with the picture.
    aye! i has the best gramer here
    TEXT is ok but it sort of runs into the dude like replace the sest

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    Quote Originally Posted by tednugent View Post
    What's wrong with my grammar?

    T.T
    Hmmmm... it's not exactly anything wrong with your grammar, it's the fact I gave jadedfrog what he wanted. A proper critique.

    Quote Originally Posted by Gourav2122 View Post
    aye! i has the best gramer here
    TEXT is ok but it sort of runs into the dude like replace the sest
    First; What the hell do you know? You don't even have photoshop.
    Second; Your grammar is really bad. My dog can do better.

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    Admins and Mod's please do not rage. This isn't a personal attack or flame, merely a point of view.
    Last edited by August2007; 07-11-2007 at 07:02 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by August2007 View Post
    Hmmmm... it's not exactly anything wrong with your grammar it's the fact I gave jadedfrog what he wanted. A proper critique.



    First; What the hell do you know? You don't even have photoshop.
    Second; Your grammar is really bad. My dog can do better.

    PS:
    Admins and Mod's please do not rage. This isn't a personal attack or flame, merely a point of view.
    well yea read this this
    Quote Originally Posted by Albatross View Post
    From what I have seen on these forums, Gourav has the best constructed sentances of all members.
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    Ps> every rips on me belive me actly mods and super basters say the same shit.

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    Thanks for the comments on it.. Assholes

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    Yeah it is a bit sharp...And it can be lighted a little better.

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