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    RATE MY THREAD DESIGN, THIS IS NOT A SALE THREAD.

    THIS IS NOT A SALE THREAD, NEED CRITIQUES SO THAT I CAN MAKE CHANGES.
    Last edited by PlainPat; 06-05-2016 at 10:58 PM.

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    Idk , that font in "Information" like in game , use normal font like Arial , btw nice job


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    Where you have your name at the top of the page, it isn't good looking. It catches the eye by looking like Japanese, not what you were going for.
    Remove all Japanese text, we use English here.
    The "circle's" on the upper part of the design do not look like proper circles more like ovals, also it should be opaque.
    The 3 buttons on the bottom of the thread look pretty bad, don't put text over the logo. If anything out it at the top or bottom of it. And the add skype button looks stretched and not good quality. Also that's pretty pointless unless your are cutting that peice out so its clickable.
    Other then what I stated it looks alright, looking forward to your future designs
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    play more with the typography







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    What Gaar said.

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    I don't like the font, maybe try another one?

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    and also

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaar View Post
    Where you have your name at the top of the page, it isn't good looking. It catches the eye by looking like Japanese, not what you were going for.
    Remove all Japanese text, we use English here.
    The "circle's" on the upper part of the design do not look like proper circles more like ovals, also it should be opaque.
    The 3 buttons on the bottom of the thread look pretty bad, don't put text over the logo. If anything out it at the top or bottom of it. And the add skype button looks stretched and not good quality. Also that's pretty pointless unless your are cutting that peice out so its clickable.
    Other then what I stated it looks alright, looking forward to your future designs
    yeah i was suppose to put somewhere that it was an anime themed/styled thread design and i did all that on purpose. but the point was to kinda show people that i know how to make a thread aimed at a certain goal or way. Changing now though.
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    its good for a thread

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