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    Feedback on 3D Banner (Feel Free to Roast)

    Just wondering what you guys think about one of my first 3D banners


    https://gyazo.com/1ab5a63519ec20257cefefbe35872d26
    Last edited by progamer1147; 06-16-2016 at 07:59 PM.

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    Ok, ill give you some critique.

    1. Don't use gyazo to upload pictures.

    2. the text looks awful, especially with the background.

    3. The stuff you used to cover the text looks awful.




    fix to #1 use something like imgur, it still loses quality but for small things it looks fine.

    fix to #2 try a better font that matches better.

    fix to #3 dont do it.
    Last edited by Gaar; 06-16-2016 at 10:51 PM.
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    Looks like absolute fucking trash

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    You have no future in gfx just leave.

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    Well......it doesn't have that 3D feeling at all... Maybe a less darker Theme would have been better

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    Quote Originally Posted by High View Post
    Looks like absolute fucking trash

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    Well you did a good CnC as always
    But back to the topic.
    I don't mind that much the text.Other than the placement that is awkward its ok i guess, but these white stuff behind it looks really weird.And the thing you put to cover the text doesn't fit well.If i were you i would try to change the text placement and remove the white stuff.Anyway keep trying and you will get better for sure!







     


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    + rep ,That guy is a god, i just told him what i want, and he did it as i said.Same idea was in my mind, thanks !
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    +1 Vouch

    Made me the sickest logo for business, definitely going to be doing future business with him, by far the best graphics designer I've used on mpgh so far!!!
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    +1 for this guy, make me a logo in 2 hours ! +++ Perfect
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    Vouch, great designs for an affordable price. Would recommend.
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    Quote Originally Posted by nick9185GR View Post
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    Well you did a good CnC as always
    But back to the topic.
    I don't mind that much the text.Other than the placement that is awkward its ok i guess, but these white stuff behind it looks really weird.And the thing you put to cover the text doesn't fit well.If i were you i would try to change the text placement and remove the white stuff.Anyway keep trying and you will get better for sure!
    hey
    ur siggy could use some work too fam
    get rid of the borders too like why do u even have them? -_-

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    looks like you just slapped it all together.
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    Thanks for all the feedback guys!

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    Quote Originally Posted by High View Post
    Looks like absolute fucking trash

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    Wow, thanks alot! WTF is wrong with you?
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    Quote Originally Posted by High View Post


    hey
    ur siggy could use some work too fam
    get rid of the borders too like why do u even have them? -_-
    I fucking love the borders :3







     


    Quote Originally Posted by Deity View Post
    Love this guy - Best designs around!
    Quote Originally Posted by Otisホ View Post
    + rep ,That guy is a god, i just told him what i want, and he did it as i said.Same idea was in my mind, thanks !
    Quote Originally Posted by ashley_cole23199 View Post
    +1 Vouch

    Made me the sickest logo for business, definitely going to be doing future business with him, by far the best graphics designer I've used on mpgh so far!!!
    Quote Originally Posted by rop89 View Post
    Love this guy! So chill, done an amazing job on my thread and also offer free edits? What more could you ask for! THe price was basically nothing! GOing to get him to my avatar and signature soon!

    VOUCH+
    Quote Originally Posted by Heinchein View Post
    +1 for this guy, make me a logo in 2 hours ! +++ Perfect
    Quote Originally Posted by Nice View Post
    Vouch, great designs for an affordable price. Would recommend.
    Quote Originally Posted by Endl3ss View Post
    voch he made me some amazing thread work!

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    Quote Originally Posted by progamer1147 View Post
    Thanks for all the feedback guys!

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    Wow, thanks alot! WTF is wrong with you?
    you told me to roast u

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    Looks good, change the color of the text







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    looks decent i guess.
    maybe if you'd use a different font it would be better

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    Looks not too bad man

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