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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    "but death cant take me or you
    for we are invincible
    what i say now is it true
    or is it based on fact and principle"

    Its asking a question not stating a fact =)
    Your grammar is a bit off than. In a poem, and writing in general, the difference between a question mark and a period could be the difference in the meaning of the phrase.

    Its called ambiguity

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    o i see now my bad =( i will work on it but you can read it and it seems like a question

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    o i see now my bad =( i will work on it but you can read it and it seems like a question
    The point is, its uncertain, we can't read your mind. You have to prep your poems for your audience, not yourself. We are supposed to get the message, and if your grammar is not right we don't know what you're talking about lol.

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    haahah i got you know my bad well my next one will be more suite and have ? marks lmao

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    Lol .

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    Man screw poems. ;l

    I don't like thinking about shit like that.... My general preference to death: "Who cares? You won't when ur dead." General preference on life "What of it? Don't do anything you'll regret, because it'll kill you faster, but don't pass up an opportunity because you fear you'll regret. See either way ur screwed, so just live life."

    "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired signifies, in the final sense, a theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed. This world in arms is not spending money alone. It is spending the sweat of its laborers, the genius of its scientists, the hopes of its children. The cost of one modern heavy bomber is this: a modern brick school in more than 30 cities. It is two electric power plants, each serving a town of 60,000 population. It is two fine, fully equipped hospitals. It is some fifty miles of concrete pavement. We pay for a single fighter plane with a half million bushels of wheat. We pay for a single destroyer with new homes that could have housed more than 8,000 people. This is, I repeat, the best way of life to be found on the road the world has been taking. This is not a way of life at all, in any true sense. Under the cloud of threatening war, it is humanity hanging from a cross of iron."
    - Dwight D. Eisenhower

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    Hum good point i i wiil try and work on a new poem and i will make sure its good =)

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    Is it true

    omg omg omg

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    sorry guys

    grrrr i made a boo boo

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