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    Quote Originally Posted by coledes1996 View Post
    so what you thought i was gone?
    no im back and im moving the pawn.
    Shatter you like a frame of glass
    Blow you up with this rap blow you back in the past.

    You think after you beat me I would fade.
    Ima hit you harder than an air raid.
    Youll try to hold on barely.
    You supprised cause someones rappin with a vocabulary?

    You trying to do a test.
    To see if I can rap like the best?
    Naw Ima lock you up in a chest.
    Throw away the key and let you rest.

    I aint gonna lie you got me there.
    But I just quarter tried it wasnt fair.
    But you should beware.
    Of the way you come at me you should care.

    Cause Ima leave with nothing but blood.
    While your on you back ima kick some mud.
    Instead of dirt on the wound.
    Your rap has been ruined.

    You shoulda known that im not a kid.
    You think that you can rid?
    Me from your streets.
    You thought that I didnt have heat?

    No im like a furnace.
    Now you on the run from dis.
    Man you so gullible.
    Thinking Im not good Ill turn your ass into a lunchable.
    ur mad late my nig

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    holy shit 4 days later and you came up with this shit????

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    holy shit 4 days later and you came up with this shit????
    STFU YOU

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    holy shit 4 days later and you came up with this shit????
    lol i just never got on for four days

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    alright well heres a lill quick and easy one

    heres some poetry i dont rap but you can
    see if you can understand this easy =)

    this pain we feel this vengence you seek
    you get ruined but yet you come back for more
    you shut your eyes but i never blink
    who woulda guessed i saw your ass on the news wash up to the shore

    you take out a gun but i brought a army
    i step back you step forward better yet i leave you in the past
    what goes threw your mind yuo think you can harm me?
    haha its time for me to relax

    your turn =)

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    you can tell it was his first rap it sucked balls

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    this rap sounded more like crap


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    heres 1

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    i like:this rap sounded more like crap


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    Quote Originally Posted by coledes1996 View Post
    Kid learn to rap
    before i bust a cap
    straight in between your eyes
    like true lies
    kid go drop your balls
    before I splatter your blood on the walls
    Lol you'res is no better.. But I can't do better than either of you lol I suck at rapping

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    Quote Originally Posted by solice12 View Post
    Lol you'res is no better.. But I can't do better than either of you lol I suck at rapping
    Really I was fucking with the kid i can do a hell of a lot better

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    alright well heres a lill quick and easy one

    heres some poetry i dont rap but you can
    see if you can understand this easy =)

    this pain we feel this vengence you seek
    you get ruined but yet you come back for more
    you shut your eyes but i never blink
    who woulda guessed i saw your ass on the news wash up to the shore

    you take out a gun but i brought a army
    i step back you step forward better yet i leave you in the past
    what goes threw your mind yuo think you can harm me?
    haha its time for me to relax

    your turn =)

    Hahaha ... im no poet but the only thing that rhymed in there was Army and Harm me ... Grats .. i think that he is a better poet/rapper/ what ever the fuck you call it, im not into this but TBH i don't know why everyone thinks your good. His ' Raps ' actually make sense .
    ps. Dont reply to this comment .. i will never be in this section again ..
    back to coding for me .. lol

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    Cool story bro.

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    Im pimped your mom cause I am so tight
    thats why was over at her house last night
    take it to the bank U R GAI
    because i do not think its ok

    whiiite boiii

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    Quote Originally Posted by coledes1996 View Post
    Kid learn to rap
    before i bust a cap
    straight in between your eyes
    like true lies
    kid go drop your balls
    before I splatter your blood on the walls
    Rofl. Nice rap. But kind of stupid. He said it's his first rap song, so give him some credit atleast.

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