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    My First Rap..

    My ass is itchy and i got no friends
    I have a car and its mercedes benz.
    It smells like shit but Ive got a lot of hits on my VID-E-O

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    Kid learn to rap
    before i bust a cap
    straight in between your eyes
    like true lies
    kid go drop your balls
    before I splatter your blood on the walls

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    some1 get my man shag up in here

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    I herd you called XD

    And this is to coldes

    you tell a kid to learn to rap
    but yet you spit shit you dont do
    whats the fuck with that?
    we all say fuck you

    so here we go this shits about to blow up


    crytalize in my eyes
    blood sheed on street
    we all live in lies
    close your eyes and go to sleep

    your a gun toting bastard
    raping like your the best
    listen to this laughter
    now imma put your ass to rest

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    I herd you called XD

    And this is to coldes

    you tell a kid to learn to rap
    but yet you spit shit you dont do
    whats the fuck with that?
    we all say fuck you

    so here we go this shits about to blow up


    crytalize in my eyes
    blood sheed on street
    we all live in lies
    close your eyes and go to sleep

    your a gun toting bastard
    raping like your the best
    listen to this laughter
    now imma put your ass to rest
    kILT THAT hahahaha

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    yea i dont like kids like him who rap about killing and shit it just aint me well i used to but not anymore im more into poetry lmao

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    Ahhh snapin at me while i messin with him spitin slow
    This rap will be a perfect flow
    Thinkin I rap about killin
    naw most of my time i sit here chillin
    and whats up with this ima kid shit
    Didnt your momma tell you not to hit
    on the greatest and show some respect?
    When i rap it will affect
    Everybody in its grip
    Is it about time for it all to tip
    Over and shatter on the floor
    Destroyin your rap ftrom the core
    And what the fuck kinda of name is shag?
    You rap so bad make me wanna gag
    So please step aside
    before you get hit my raps stride
    Staright through the radio waves
    Where you will listen to it for days and days
    wondering how i rap like pro
    So duck before you get hit to the floor
    And when I beat you you hear champange bottles poppin
    "Bang" What was that sound? Its the last nail in your coffin

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    Quote Originally Posted by coledes1996 View Post
    Ahhh snapin at me while i messin with him spitin slow
    This rap will be a perfect flow
    Thinkin I rap about killin
    naw most of my time i sit here chillin
    and whats up with this ima kid shit
    Didnt your momma tell you not to hit
    on the greatest and show some respect?
    When i rap it will affect
    Everybody in its grip
    Is it about time for it all to tip
    Over and shatter on the floor
    Destroyin your rap ftrom the core
    And what the fuck kinda of name is shag?
    You rap so bad make me wanna gag
    So please step aside
    before you get hit my raps stride
    Staright through the radio waves
    Where you will listen to it for days and days
    wondering how i rap like pro
    So duck before you get hit to the floor
    And when I beat you you hear champange bottles poppin
    "Bang" What was that sound? Its the last nail in your coffin
    Nice but u bout to lose

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    haha i dont know who this kid is?? XD

    yo man you better leave now
    befor you get in over your head
    no more talkin shit now
    you might end up dead

    but you ask how you seem like a pro?
    can tell you because you steal people lines
    you aint no fuckin pro and we all know
    and you cannot deny

    these lyrics i put out
    get you confused and thinking
    and now i shout
    your a fucking dead man now

    im going easy for a bit
    to see what you got
    befor i light this up
    you must never forget this is the it

    so befor you think of some shity poem
    i thot id let you know
    im a fucking poet
    not a rapper it just goes to show



    rap BACK I DONT IM A POET AND YOUR SKILLS SUCK SO BAD DUDE

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    I kno u aint gon take that coledes1996 u better get em

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    Quote Originally Posted by BJIZZLE View Post
    I kno u aint gon take that coledes1996 u better get em
    Lol. Soemone's playin Devil's advocate. (hate this fkin smilie...)

    "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired signifies, in the final sense, a theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed. This world in arms is not spending money alone. It is spending the sweat of its laborers, the genius of its scientists, the hopes of its children. The cost of one modern heavy bomber is this: a modern brick school in more than 30 cities. It is two electric power plants, each serving a town of 60,000 population. It is two fine, fully equipped hospitals. It is some fifty miles of concrete pavement. We pay for a single fighter plane with a half million bushels of wheat. We pay for a single destroyer with new homes that could have housed more than 8,000 people. This is, I repeat, the best way of life to be found on the road the world has been taking. This is not a way of life at all, in any true sense. Under the cloud of threatening war, it is humanity hanging from a cross of iron."
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    hahah your funny kid i wasnt even trying and i wont because he isnt worth my time altho ill do some poetry here and their but other then that he sucks at rapping period ok so their is nothing to do sure he has some flow but no fucking message worth a shit so thats good to know you have shitty mind to because you cant see whats prue gold and what aint good job

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    kid will always be a kid.
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    so what you thought i was gone?
    no im back and im moving the pawn.
    Shatter you like a frame of glass
    Blow you up with this rap blow you back in the past.

    You think after you beat me I would fade.
    Ima hit you harder than an air raid.
    Youll try to hold on barely.
    You supprised cause someones rappin with a vocabulary?

    You trying to do a test.
    To see if I can rap like the best?
    Naw Ima lock you up in a chest.
    Throw away the key and let you rest.

    I aint gonna lie you got me there.
    But I just quarter tried it wasnt fair.
    But you should beware.
    Of the way you come at me you should care.

    Cause Ima leave with nothing but blood.
    While your on you back ima kick some mud.
    Instead of dirt on the wound.
    Your rap has been ruined.

    You shoulda known that im not a kid.
    You think that you can rid?
    Me from your streets.
    You thought that I didnt have heat?

    No im like a furnace.
    Now you on the run from dis.
    Man you so gullible.
    Thinking Im not good Ill turn your ass into a lunchable.

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