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    First Mascot Logo

    Hey guys, I'd like some feedback on my first mascot logo I made a bit ago.

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    I would remove the lollipops from next to his head and the pink lines off of the text. Maybe put the lollipops or candy somewhere within the text, rather than the crown again.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mien View Post
    I would remove the lollipops from next to his head and the pink lines off of the text. Maybe put the lollipops or candy somewhere within the text, rather than the crown again.
    That's what the client wanted.

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    As i told you before if you fix the text it will be perfect imo .Good job mate i like it!







     


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    Quote Originally Posted by Cloud Anarchy View Post
    As i told you before if you fix the text it will be perfect imo .Good job mate i like it!


    The text seems fine, to me but the font and font size doesn't seems to quite match up. I don't really fancy the mascot with the lollipops as there are already a lots of lollipops in the background already. I think the pink background also seems to be too gradient. I think you can lower the intensity/gradient so I can see it without hurting my eyes. But meh, it's my opinion after all.

    But it's not too bad, I just don't really like it as it's not my style. Good luck!

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    Quote Originally Posted by MzLightning View Post


    The text seems fine, to me but the font and font size doesn't seems to quite match up. I don't really fancy the mascot with the lollipops as there are already a lots of lollipops in the background already. I think the pink background also seems to be too gradient. I think you can lower the intensity/gradient so I can see it without hurting my eyes. But meh, it's my opinion after all.

    But it's not too bad, I just don't really like it as it's not my style. Good luck!
    "The maskot is perfect but you need to fix the text maybe sitck it together with the maskot and try to change the font.I would also suggest removing these pink lines.So overall the maskot is really really good imo and i felt like you messed up the easier part which is the text.Good job mate i like it!"

    Thats what i told him i like the maskot but not the text.







     


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    I liked it but like Mien said...

    I would take out the lollipops.
    I would take out the Crown from the first letter and add it to the "G" in King and put some kind of candy or lollipop on the "CANDY" text.

    I don`t really like the background, you could make it a bit cleaner and maybe have lass lollipops or a different image on the back too.

    Other than that, I like it.

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    Lollipops kinda make him look like Mickey Mouse

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