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    Quote Originally Posted by Gaar View Post


    Thanks for the CnC, i can defiantly see what you're talking about with the neck so i will fix that. And for the arm i think it looks alright overall as the charater himself is very skinny i don't think that his upper arm would be that much bigger, or so i have learned on male anatomy.
    Also on the girl, get right arm looks a bit thinker then usual. Make the line of her arm closer to her body so it does not look that big.

    Keep up the great work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dynasty View Post
    Also on the girl, get right arm looks a bit thinker then usual. Make the line of her arm closer to her body so it does not look that big.

    Keep up the great work.
    The left and right arm do not match and it actually looks really bad, thanks for pointing that out.
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    Brah, keep it up, that drawing sicks

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    Everyone pointed out the anatomy issues already. I am seeing that you should practice with drawing straight lines, make a two dots from point A to point B and then put your pencil on point A look at point B and just draw while looking at point B. Takes some practice but in the end, you will learn straight lines. I bring this up because of your clothing, mainly the pants/shorts, have messy lines.

    You should practice with fitting the clothing to the anatomy of the character. The guys left hand in his pocket seems flat, his hips/legs seem boxy. Females tend to have wider hips, she doesn't have wide hips, in fact, they seem too small.

    I do like this piece, better anime style than I can draw. If you keep this up, you could possibly start learning how to make webcomics (or manga).

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    OT: I really like it, can you do custom drawings (looking for an avatar) for a fee?



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