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    It's Just Lonely

    hi im back...well in the community and i make this poetry when i was lonely and just lonely so here it goes(sorry if if the language wasn't right english is not my main )

    Time was running out
    my heart run like a racing car
    to catch away my dream
    to make full of u as mine

    don’t know how
    I just lovin u
    love never have a reason
    love doesn’t need a reason

    love was came just like that
    never know how can I be lovin you
    I never understand how can I fallin in love

    love make me live
    and I live for lovin u
    to make u happy
    to kill every sadness in your live

    love is a bigest give whom God gave
    love was full of happiness and sadness
    a lot of mistery inside
    The biggest mistery of every heart

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    Nice love it ^.^

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    cool poem bro

    lawl at ur avatar .
    I am the God.

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    awww thats sweet!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sam619 View Post
    Nice love it ^.^
    TQ
    Quote Originally Posted by GOD View Post
    cool poem bro

    lawl at ur avatar .
    ummm FYI im a girl
    Quote Originally Posted by ROUTE66 View Post
    awww thats sweet!
    thx

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    nice u should make more


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    hope this one's good or at least...worth to be read so here it goes

    You changed my world with a blink of an eye
    That is something that I can not deny
    You put my soul from worst to best

    You just don't know what you have done for me
    You even pushed me to the best that I can be
    You really are an angel that sent from above
    To take care of me and show it with love

    When I'm with you I will not cry even a single tear
    And your touch have chased away all of my fear
    You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile
    It's better to see you smile


    Now I have found what I am looking for
    It's you and your love and nothing more
    Co'z you have given me this feeling
    In my life, something I've never felt

    I wish I could talk 'til the end of day
    But now I'm running out of things to say
    So I'll end by the line you already know
    "I LOVE YOU" more than what I could show.

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    That's really good, i liked it.

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    another poem...by me hope its a good one...


    Just let me dream of you tonight
    And that you are mine,
    I want to hold you in my dream for a million years,
    Let me be the one to fulfill all your fantasies.

    I want to be the one
    That will give you...
    The chills that will run down
    Your heart is always be mine.

    Remember my darling...
    You have already engraved very deep Inside of me...
    Your everlasting love
    That is craving and crying.

    To feel you...
    Drawing me with your hands,
    And drawing me with the softness of your mouth,
    To feel the heat of your heart.

    Since I saw the flames burning in your eyes..
    Mean while my lips and mouth
    Will be searching for you
    And leaving all my prints
    Of my burning flames of fire within your being.
    I am telling you

    That I am all yours,
    all I want is, for you to take the whole of my soul,
    Since all I want is to bring you with me till death do us apart
    With the warmth of my feeling.
    'Cause Darling,
    All I want is you...

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    woh thats heavy! um verry emotional excellent i give you 5 stars!

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    THX appreciate that..
    btw nice sig

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    Quote Originally Posted by samsara View Post
    THX appreciate that..
    btw nice sig
    your welcome and my sig is the angle of vengence
    glad you like it!

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    ooo angel of vengeance....
    duh,should maked some sig
    Last edited by samsara; 02-24-2010 at 09:17 AM.

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    That was

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    hope this one is good too...maybe im just a dreamer...hoping to be his...

    Sorry, for the way I stare
    Forgive me, for the way I think of you
    Pardon me, for dreaming all about you
    And do understand, the way I love you

    If you just knew what it is like this way
    I think of you to start the day
    I act so strange if you're around
    I feel my heart smile when I see you
    I can't speak many words about you
    And I'd be hurt if you can't be mine

    If you just knew how long I've been hidin'
    I never want you to notice
    That I'm simply falling in love
    But I hate the way I feel this pain
    The pain, the fear of not wanting you to know
    Or even just to give you a single clue

    If I'd think about how I acted when you're near
    I think I'm gonna feel regret if i'm not saying to you
    Coz I think I got lost that moment
    Trembling, gasping for what to do and say
    If I just knew how to be myself
    Then, I didnt have to act someone else

    If tomorrow comes that you'd learn
    The way I see you, the way I feel for you
    Please...I never want you to turn away
    Let me love the sight of you

    I'm really glad that i've found you
    I feel hurts so bad falling for you
    I can never grace my heart way to you

    I guess I have to stay this way
    With your presence to my heart away
    I'd be unnoticed, unseen and unloved by you

    I hope it's alright
    If I'd be loving you silently
    You don't have to worry
    I have nothing to ask for
    Although I know it can't be
    Just let me be this way
    Maybe for a while, for a moment
    Or maybe it could be forever.

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