good so far? , [ help, by adding on, change some, etc,etc]
so basically this, my girlfriends crying, and she kinda of angry at me...long story, but I'm kinda high right now, so i'm written this poem/ rap or whatever, any help would be cool, might be bad, but ...I'm white XD, and i need to get my mind on something.
My baby girl is crying,
theres nothing I can do,
The thought of you hurt makes me wanna cry too,
I know that you are angry and I know that it's my fault,
but I don't want our relashionship to ever fall apart,
Well, I cant be there for her cause I cant drive till a year, I get her pissed, because I'm " not serious" about anything cause I'm trying to make her smile, I should also say ....she has a boy friend...were kind of in an affair, but idk what, I'm not trying to turn this into a b'aww thread XD.
 I should also add I think, that I do ADDH meds, weed, and oxies, and I'm gonna stop doing everything, ( the doctor said im addicted to caffeine, so im stopping that shit T.T) for her, just trying to give you information, while out becoming a bitch
well ... the reason they haven't really broken up...least this is what her best friend said, was that, he beats her, so she's afraid to leave ( one of THOSE things), I'm already getting him taken care of, hah I mean New Hampshire isn't no gang land, but he's some fagot that thinks he's in the crips ( i know ANOTHER one) things might not be coming out in the right order, but like I said, I'm on some shit. also, if you got any tips for getting an okay flow in rapping, I'd like to hear. thanks for your help guys, I ain't well known, but you guys make people feel like they were always here...( sorry for kind of rambling...)