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    My Poem/Rap

    Busting Rhymes
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    Whenever I知 down,
    I look at a clown.
    When I知 sad,
    I start to get mad.
    But I mostly get happy,
    Even when the weather gets crappy.
    Because I知 always busting rhymes,
    I知 always eating some limes.
    Because I知 always chilling with my home dawg Dylan.

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    haha that was prety good for beggging man keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    haha that was prety good for beggging man keep it up
    lol thanks i got a 100% for this at school lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by jakobkorber View Post
    lol thanks i got a 100% for this at school lol
    Elementary school?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Obama View Post
    Elementary school?
    You mad cause he white and can rap better then you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Obama View Post
    Elementary school?
    Umm High School Actually
    Lady Gaga: PApapapapappap Poker Face
    Producer: One More Time From The Top And Try Not To Stutter
    Lady Gaga: I Dont Sta-sta-sta-stutter
    Producer: oh my god JUST SHUT UP!!!!!
    (blows Brains Out With Pistol)
    Lady Gaga: Misssttaa PraPraPraDucer???????
    ....... OH NOES!!!!!!
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    yeh pretty tight man!

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    thanks it really apriciated
    Lady Gaga: PApapapapappap Poker Face
    Producer: One More Time From The Top And Try Not To Stutter
    Lady Gaga: I Dont Sta-sta-sta-stutter
    Producer: oh my god JUST SHUT UP!!!!!
    (blows Brains Out With Pistol)
    Lady Gaga: Misssttaa PraPraPraDucer???????
    ....... OH NOES!!!!!!
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    well idk you may hang with me and a few other poets or "Rappers" on here but right now get your rep up aight

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    Lady Gaga: PApapapapappap Poker Face
    Producer: One More Time From The Top And Try Not To Stutter
    Lady Gaga: I Dont Sta-sta-sta-stutter
    Producer: oh my god JUST SHUT UP!!!!!
    (blows Brains Out With Pistol)
    Lady Gaga: Misssttaa PraPraPraDucer???????
    ....... OH NOES!!!!!!
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