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    my rap

    ok we all know this dude benji..
    i was fukkin around sayin he sucked, and then he has the balls to step to me..
    which is all fun, but the lesson g, is dont take it personal when i said all that shit laughing..

    see,
    Benji is just a kid who tries to spit..
    and by "TRIES, TO, SPIT" -- i mean every fuckking word of it..
    and because of THAT, well that he thinks he can rap..
    he posts a hate comment on every single vid i tack..

    up on any of my sites, and that aint right..
    cuz i was joking around, i really didnt wanna start a fight..
    but then he comes, sayin i suck and hes hurtin fools..
    sayin he beats me in flow n shit, cuz i didnt use any personals..

    but personally, i didnt feel i had to do you like that..
    i even hit you up and said its all for the fun of rap..
    but u still came talkin shit, benji just PIPE DOWN..
    you want personals, BITCH LETS FUCKING GO, Right now..

    Benji is nothing but a isreal'in bitch, who sucks dick..
    who spews cum stains from his mom, all over his jewish lips..
    and i aint racist or nothin, but benji u need to watch it..
    cuz ill burn yuh fukkin ass faster then yuh fam did in aushwitz..

    and i aint even gonna front like imma appologize..
    like you do after u diss someone with all ur fukkin lies..
    and ever line, you spit thinkin u dope, how do u cope..
    dont even flow,how do u know, u are the shit, u just a bitch..

    easily clipped, outta this game, every line always the same..
    repeatin urself im goin insane, gettin ur girl -- given her brain..
    IM getin the fame, im not playin, u aint though so get outta my place..
    look at his pics, two catipillars fightin gang wars up on his face..

    i only got SOME real fans? TOUGH BENJI cuz i play rough..
    Hilter had SOME fans to and took ur whole 'cestry down at once..
    so i wont front, cuz u suck, you got dick all in ur butt..
    so butt hurt u probably cant even sit down in any chairs for months..

    you just mad, i got fans, truth be told who gives a damn..
    some play wow, SO that doesnt mean that they dont like music fam..
    Just be jelous more, and make tracks that everyone ignores..
    let me open a door, so u can do tracks that dont make people snore..

    lose your accent, ur flow, ur rhymes, ur scheme..
    ur wordplay ur delivery, ur milties ya it seems..
    everything about you sucks, so i mean ill wish u luck..
    cuz id help you out if u werent a meager n measley little fuck..

    n ill admit that this youtube shit ya is pretty funny..
    im no dumby, this is practice for my future, i plan for money..
    but when u come at me talkin shit it tickles my tummy..
    raps like gumby, u OUT your MIND if u think u can take this from me..

    and did i mention, im ill son when it comes to lessons..
    check ur sentence cuz ill reverse um with no second guessin..
    why do u collab with everyone HUH, nah man im not stressin..
    just a 16 yr old BITCH, who fukkin needs attention..

    and i wouldnt give up any of my fans for ones like urs..
    closed minded assholes u will get everything u deserve..
    and mark my words,watch for curbs, cuz my rhymes will swerve..
    so were nerds, dont mean i dont rap better, you'll get fukkin served..

    so like em, this is yuh warning shot..
    i aint afraid to blow up yuh whole fuckking spot..
    leave yuh body disfigured, crushed face in a lot..
    keep them words to yuh self and get ur hands off my jock..

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    Nice copy and paste lol

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    copy and pasta doesnt work here brah
    I am the God.

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    dude your full of shit you didnt do this dont copy and paste aight

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    The jew line was still crazy ^_^

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    lol looks just like my rap

    Benji is just a kid who tries to spit..
    and by "TRIES, TO, SPIT" -- i mean every fuckking word of it..
    and because of THAT, well that he thinks he can rap..
    he posts a hate comment on every single vid i tack..

    up on any of my sites, and that aint right..
    cuz i was joking around, i really didnt wanna start a fight..
    but then he comes, sayin i suck and hes hurtin fools..
    sayin he beats me in flow n shit, cuz i didnt use any personals..

    but personally, i didnt feel i had to do you like that..
    i even hit you up and said its all for the fun of rap..
    but u still came talkin shit, benji just PIPE DOWN..
    you want personals, BITCH LETS FUCKING GO, Right now..

    Benji is nothing but a isreal'in bitch, who sucks dick..
    who spews cum stains from his mom, all over his jewish lips..
    and i aint racist or nothin, but benji u need to watch it..
    cuz ill burn yuh fukkin ass faster then yuh fam did in aushwitz..

    and i aint even gonna front like imma appologize..
    like you do after u diss someone with all ur fukkin lies..
    and ever line, you spit thinkin u dope, how do u cope..
    dont even flow,how do u know, u are the shit, u just a bitch..

    easily clipped, outta this game, every line always the same..
    repeatin urself im goin insane, gettin ur girl -- given her brain..
    IM getin the fame, im not playin, u aint though so get outta my place..
    look at his pics, two catipillars fightin gang wars up on his face..

    i only got SOME real fans? TOUGH BENJI cuz i play rough..
    Hilter had SOME fans to and took ur whole 'cestry down at once..
    so i wont front, cuz u suck, you got dick all in ur butt..
    so butt hurt u probably cant even sit down in any chairs for months..

    you just mad, i got fans, truth be told who gives a damn..
    some play wow, SO that doesnt mean that they dont like music fam..
    Just be jelous more, and make tracks that everyone ignores..
    let me open a door, so u can do tracks that dont make people snore..

    lose your accent, ur flow, ur rhymes, ur scheme..
    ur wordplay ur delivery, ur milties ya it seems..
    everything about you sucks, so i mean ill wish u luck..
    cuz id help you out if u werent a meager n measley little fuck..

    n ill admit that this youtube shit ya is pretty funny..
    im no dumby, this is practice for my future, i plan for money..
    but when u come at me talkin shit it tickles my tummy..
    raps like gumby, u OUT your MIND if u think u can take this from me..

    and did i mention, im ill son when it comes to lessons..
    check ur sentence cuz ill reverse um with no second guessin..
    why do u collab with everyone HUH, nah man im not stressin..
    just a 16 yr old BITCH, who fukkin needs attention..

    and i wouldnt give up any of my fans for ones like urs..
    closed minded assholes u will get everything u deserve..
    and mark my words,watch for curbs, cuz my rhymes will swerve..
    so were nerds, dont mean i dont rap better, you'll get fukkin served..

    so like em, this is yuh warning shot..
    i aint afraid to blow up yuh whole fuckking spot..
    leave yuh body disfigured, crushed face in a lot..
    keep them words to yuh self and get ur hands off my jock..

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    Funny, this kind of looks like mine....doesn't it?

    Mine:

    ____

    Well, see...

    We all know this guy.....Named, Bob from myspace.
    This guy is real slick, with his copy and sly pastes.

    Stupid Fuck, what were you thinking fool
    Didn't you know we have the internet to,

    You didn't think for one second we would look that shit up?
    As if we were gonna thank you and not give a fuck...

    As if we were going to let you take somebody's glory
    well fuck it....
    gloves are off.....
    Im'a tell everyone your story...

    Bob is just a fat slob, who can't even spit.
    though he tries...
    and he tries.....
    but it still sounds like shit

    "COME ON STOP.... THIS IS MINE......
    I'M GONNA SWARE TO IT"
    Come on Bob, You stole this ryhme.
    i mean..... every fuckking word of it..


     


     


     



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    avoid

    1.- "personals..

    but personally"

    2.- copying and pasting

    3.- and being a choob

    in MPGH

    faggot
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    busted by nextgen1 GOOD JOB dont mess with MPGH copy and paster!

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    or you will end up like sam
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    Quote Originally Posted by fcmclan View Post
    avoid

    1.- "personals..

    but personally"

    2.- copying and pasting

    3.- and being a choob

    in MPGH

    faggot
    1. Huh?

    - What?

    2. Agreed

    3. Choob's can't help but be choobs
    it's in their nature


     


     


     



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    Quote Originally Posted by NextGen1 View Post


    1. Huh?

    - What?

    2. Agreed

    3. Choob's can't help but be choobs
    it's in their nature
    lol in the rhyme he says ends a phrase with "personals" and then inmediately he starts another one with "but personally"
    repeating words so closely is a mistake that makes the rhyme cheaper and its caused by lack of creativity or talent

    olol
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