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    Elizabeth, a turn for Worse.(Proof read Story)

    Wow, cant believe its been 2 days since ive seen the girls, its feels so much longer. ‘Havent you had breakfast this morning Liz?’ said mum, ‘Nope, ill grab some at school’ I replied.
    As I came up, I saw my group chatting as usual in the same spot as always, we had a special bench that the Student Council had approved. As I got there, I put my bag and books down on the ground, and as I reached for a seat on the Bench, Anna, the Group Leader, Stood up in all her glory, as her beautiful long sandy hair whispered in the Wind, she said in a simple sentence ‘Liz, I want you out of our group’, I stood there for a second, waiting for a reply saying, Jokes. It never happened. I simply stood still, waiting for words to come out of my mouth, I could only push out a simple noise, as in I no idea what to say at all, ‘Liz, its just, we are the school representatives and we need to keep our grooming standards up, u have gained weight, u haven’t been brushing your hair, You look atrocious’. I looked at the others, some turned their head, as if they didn’t want anything to do with it. My head fell to my feet, I grabbed my bag, and ran straight to the toilets with tears streaming down my face.

    ‘How could they do this’, ‘I did nothing wrong’. As I paused to wipe my eyes, mascara had dripped down my face, as if it as oil running down a newly oiled wheel standing in still motion.
    I then took a long hard look into the mirror. I saw what the girls were saying, my giant thighs, my chubby chin, my bulging stomach, I was a fat bitch. I need to get thin, ASAP. My fingers fell into my mouth, I slid my long dry sandpaper like fingers to the back of my throat, a hot steamy stew of vomit caresses my throat and comes up and out into the toilet, Relief. I look back at the Mirror while I wipe my face of the dark-green liquid and carrot chunks. I saw me, A thinner me, What I had thrown up had made me thin. The true Dieting secret. But, I wasn’t about to be one of those girls who throws up after every meal, just a quick here and there, to keep me looking good.

    I left the toilets feeling, thin but still pissed off and angry, so I just walked out, simply walked out the school gates, I didn’t know how easy you could do it, but, I did, as if a was a professional ninja swiftly stalking his prey. My House was only a few blocks down. On the way I held my head in my hands, just the scene of Anna calling me fat, I didn’t know what to do, thank her, or rip her head off. Anna had opened my eyes to what I really was, but still, what she did was hurtful and totally uncalled for.

    That night after dinner, I asked mum, ‘Can I just go brush my teeth and go to bed’?.
    ‘Yer sure’ she replied. I rushed upstairs and closed the bathroom door, I looked at myself in the steam rattled mirror, my thighs have gotten bigger and bigger, bigger than what they’ve ever been. Seeing as it worked the first time I pulled my fingers to the back of my throat and again, a hot steamy pile of puke came up, I kept my fingers in my throat while heeving it up, and just kept puking, the more I did it, the more I lost, the feeling was horrible, then as quick as it happened, the bathroom door burst open, mum saw me on my knee’s with my hand in my mouth, while I heeved another batch of puke onto the floor and mums slippers. The way that mum looked at me, I knew what ive become.

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    DO NOT FRET, THIS STORY IS NOT BASED ON [MPGH]Liz, SIMPLY A NAME, THAT I CHOSE, I LIKED THE NAME ELIZEBETH, SO I USED IT, LIZ I HOPE U TAKE NO OFFENCE TO THIS AT ALL, JUST WANTED SOME PEOPPLE TO PROOF READ IT

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    Way to DP and you riped this from me

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    Such a troll Josh, Just Shuddap and Leave

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    Ifya even bothered to read it Josh

    Its bout a 15 year old girl who gets socially rejected by her social group cuz she was fat., she then develops Anorexia, and slowly discovers what she has become

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    pretty graphic man!

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    Hey, it was either this or Teen Pregnancy,

    I think i made good choice.

    LOL, if i have done teen pregnancy. WOOh, thtd b a story

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    Good enough for Aussies I suppose..

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    A sick story about liz





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    /fp Dave...

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