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    A.V.A. Rap

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    This rap is not meant to offend anyone's religions or ways of life. If you are a person who gets offended easily, then you can go back.

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    "The way I handle the AK-47 is straight up erratic
    And with the SV-98 I'll keep you running all night
    Alright!
    It's never 'Alright' if I got a RPG-7
    And with the AKS-74U, I'll kill you as if you were a Jew
    And I'll 'nade ya when I get the chance because you're the worst
    I'll give you a Yellow M18 if you're the first
    And you'll feel submersed when you get hit with the smoke
    And while you're coughing and wheezing
    I'll make your whole team a joke
    And if I don't think you're suffering
    Then you're living a dream"

    I've made some cuts on my rap, compared with the original one. Also I've used some names of Alliance of Valiant Arms weapons.
    Feel free to help me make this rap sound better.

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    Warning Ren,
    This lyrics may offend you...
    but don't go back
    cause... really it was meant to.

    Let me start off by saying...
    Addorable....
    nope, never mind.
    this shit was just horrible.

    The way you handle a ak-47?
    You mean the toy gun
    you purchased in aisle 7?
    I mean the one you were given
    cause your only 11
    it seems you got shot
    now your going to heaven

    But don't worry, not really it's only a game.
    it's fake, you suck
    it's all just the same

    and It really worry's me
    how your mentality is sick
    just cause you play gay games,
    doesn't mean you like dick.

    So just cause you play COD just for some fun
    doesn't make you an expert on shooting those guns

    and why even for one second does it have to be jews
    oh, I know what happend, they shot you , you lose.

    ok, so what , the screen says Game Over ...., Shit!
    I guess it should read, Fucking get over it

    and do me a favor,
    this isn't a fight
    so don't reply back
    Game over.... "Alright!?"
    Last edited by NextGen1; 04-06-2010 at 11:22 PM.


     


     


     



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    ahhhh next gen pretty funny man haha

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    here my attemp

    hey man you better listen
    you can give it a try
    but you will never reach that mission
    cause you will die in the blink of an eye

    you think your so good and holy
    so inoccent at heart
    but im fuckin godly
    ill cold cut your ass

    just cause you play them video games
    dont mean shit in real life
    cause that shit runnin thru your vains
    you need it or else youll die to night

    lifes not a game
    to fuck with
    nothings the same
    so get over it!


    haahha how was that ? only took like 2 mins iff that

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    Go Nextgen, pwned him
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    Y'know, this rap is just for fun. If you're so much big of a talk don't post on the AVA section then. There's a section for kids like you called Flame & Rage. Just use the search button. Like I always said: if you don't know shit, don't say shit.

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    you talking to me?


     


     


     



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    lets get him next gen lmfao

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    Quote Originally Posted by NextGen1 View Post
    you talking to me?
    Oh, so I see. You're too dumb. Alright, go back to school. Go learn some new crap. Good luck.
    Oh, and your Momma will pay you the School. Don't worry.

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