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    Thumbs up *update* New Rap + Updated Real G

    *Fame*
    Life is a lame shame fight for fame its all the same just like
    hacks go an get a 6 pack nerds learning all about birds
    go fuck a girl go get some friends an maybe buy a
    mercedez benz an stop drivin your moms mini van
    you god damn golf fan bet you cant even play just lay
    on your coutch and watch the game what a shame
    or what ever they call it i dont know i hate it
    i ate it like it was a sandwitch you little bitch go make
    some shit go try n lick your arm pit your wierd your lame
    youll never accomplish fame golf wont help neither will
    swimming and smokin weed look at micheal felps
    you go to school everyone says your uncool u try and
    deal with it you wont heal from the abuse they give you
    slim sady will come and save you i hope he will to me too
    shady i admire you so see this through and help me
    you see this too and you dont do nothin ill feel hopeless
    like i do most of the time and so useless like kanye hes so
    heartless what a mess with the famous people the only 2
    good ones are EminEm and Lilwayne whos in jail
    he got the nail for a gun on his tour bus that sucks
    he was risin up and yo hes got money and same with slim
    i just so badly wanna meet him and say how cool he is
    i dont know if he realises it but im his #1 fan dude hes the
    man i know you might not think so but i do and i hope you
    all see this through Like the good people of the united
    states just like it says on all yo liscence plates and
    were you met all your soul mates you love
    So Slim Shady Eminem Marshal Mathers what ever you
    want to be called...im callin out to you man im inspired
    i get tired of writing these raps and not gettin reconised
    for it its a boat load of shit man you know what im sayin
    you wont get famous just playin round youll just go down
    and get pounded........B.....Eminem man see this through....
    #1 fan man
    B - D-I-Z-Z-L-E

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    Udated Real G

    *Real G*Updated*
    Yo i am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century
    I see life as a strategic game all about fame whos to blame.... god .....no that kid named todd
    life is hard at points rollin joints you'll make it through bills are like hills your popin pills already ya head is
    heavy
    one thing you will always know is your mom is bomb she helps you through anything you need
    ya dad and her made a seed that was you, i see you through
    I am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century!
    Money and fame are all so lame its like one big worldwide game
    if ya know what im saying...im not playin...obama is ruinin the economy
    you all can see the stock market dropped just stopped
    hope we will see this through each an everyone of you!
    Fagget is a world wide term called to exspecially people with a perm
    its not nice it dont smell like old spice smells like some dead ass mice
    I am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century!
    Yo playa hear what im sayin i told you im not playin
    i beat you in the heat of summer try and pull me from her
    ill kick your ass and smash your face in the ground
    like beef you get mad my girl is sad see what you did
    then you ran an hid like a pussy ill punch you
    ill kick you ill kill you if you touch my girl again
    your like a fukin sin i hate you ill beat you with slate
    you fukin no good shark bait peice of shit you smell like a sweaty arm pit
    I am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century!
    You think your a pimp walk with a limp bring the cane think you hit like a crane
    nathan is your name thats not pimp its a shame you fail you so lame
    think your in the rap game your not ill put ur head in a pot...of lobsters
    still alive pinchin yah head then youll go cry in bed
    like a pussy yah a little wussy not a pimp so stop the limp
    ya not cool as fat as a oversized wire spool your a tool
    not like a playa like a hard as peice of junk to deal with
    I am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century!
    Ya came out of the woom like zoom had a this is 50 hat on
    and baggy cloths why be like that chump go an hump ya lady
    not like shady hes my inspiration to write this song
    he on top he wont stop no matta what you fools say
    hell beat you in the light of day your all gay
    eminem the best go burn the hair on ya chest if ya dont like him
    then ill come cut off yah limb i am b dizzle not saying to the hizzle like jay z
    you see he isnt no good he things hes hood hes not good he sucks so bad
    he makes me so mad hes not like marshal mathers he has it made
    go put a lamp shade on jay z and turn the light off dont wanna see his fail
    ass face no more hes a fucking whore what about kanye at the vma
    taylor swift shulda kicked him in the dick hes a fukin prick
    he so heartless that little shit he desserves to get hit
    go get him slim beat the shit outta him n ill come tear off a limb
    Eminem is on top of the rap game he deserves it hes the shit he owns by 8 mile
    I am me and as you see i can be the nect G of the 21st century

    peace
    B - D-I-Z-Z-L-E OUT

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    I'm not a big fan of it, 2 posts of ramble, but not bad.


     


     


     



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    k... not really ramble if you get the beat that the lyrics go they are all together good

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    Lol itsa Eminem :P nah jk gj o-o
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    Quote Originally Posted by вℓυє View Post
    Lol itsa Eminem :P nah jk gj o-o
    I see the resemblance lol psshhh as if

    Also about the rap i got as far as 4 words into it and got bored but gj any ways!

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    ahhhh not to be a douche but it sucked but keep trying man

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    well its not that bad but nowherenear awesome keep trying and ide suggest not putting really bright colors and big fonts cuz it makes it look too long and we here at mpgh dont like reading alot ohh and try writing it in lines like in sentances and not paraghraphs it helps to keep beat and know how to say it without a beat or a track hope it helps and best of luck on ur next rap keep posting
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    ''Hacks,what hacks''? *shoots through wall* ''i dont know what your talking about''

    rep me cuz im Mexican

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