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    Poisoned World ~ By Thieving Eh

    Started out as an angry poem, decided to turn it into a rap due to excessive swearing and just a natural rap flow rather than a poem one. Enjoi?

    This is about how corrupt our world is, and what needs to be done to change it.



    I see problems growing everywhere like vines,
    Of a posion ivy plant creepin' up our spines.
    We know it's there, but we neglect it like a fetus,
    Like when we look to the stars and forget about Cetus.
    Noone seems to give a shit anymore about the world we live in,
    And everyone's disrespectin,
    their brother's and sister's with different coloured skin.
    It's sad, like titanic our ship will go down,
    Except we've already melted the ice bergs, it's time to drown.
    But if people would just open their eye's and their hearts,
    To be the change we need, even with just one person it starts.
    We need to re-engineer our world cuz our civility is disappearing,
    Drugs, money, hate, war, and governemtal profiteering,
    I thought we abolished slavery in 1865,
    Then why did we let it survive?
    In Africa slave trade is plenty alive.
    In school they teach you math, but you can't even solve a simple equation,
    That mankind is suffering from a severe abrasion.
    We need to build a new ark to survive the flood we started,
    And sail the open sea's uncharted.
    Find land, live life, rebuild the world on an island,
    And we can imagine the future like the mind of Eric Nylund.
    But this is a feat easier said than done,
    We gotta convince the world to put down their guns.
    And instead of hating eachother for material things,
    Beauty and compasion is what the future could bring.
    But only if we make it happen with our actions,
    And put ourselves behind all the distractions.
    Think about it, you can fight wars and become a king,
    But when your downfall come's and you die what can you bring.
    To the grave, none of the material shit only your memory of a genocide,
    That you stood by and watched happen while you played jekyll and hyde.
    You're one man on the outside, but beneath the 3 quarter suit,
    Is an animal running a worldwide house of ill repute.
    Abusing and using and rusing other's just to make a buck,
    But what if I was abusing you're family would you give a fuck?
    Hypocritical lives lead from behind the final lines of defence,
    While you send the men and women trying to support their families on the offense,
    You live your life with a pretense, with past progressive tense,
    And all of this at another man, woman, and child's expense.
    So when you're gone what legacy do you leave behind?
    Other than the knowledge that you undermined.
    You're own kind, a species that was designed,
    With love in mind, not the hate we refined.
    So you can live a comfortable life while hurting others,
    Or you can live a happy life with another's,
    Feelings and compasion held dear to eachother.
    What I've said I made loud and clear,
    That we need to begin a new frontier.
    Of world peace, a world in order,
    Not a world plagued by a psychosomatic disorder.
    You can be the change that the world needs to see,
    Just step out of your comfort zone and make the decree.
    That you will stand up for the righteous and the weak,
    And promise yourself from now on that you'll be unique.

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    Retracted, Could be wrong in regards to taking lyrics
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    Quote Originally Posted by NextGen1 View Post
    Wow , Your famous....This same exact poem that is "Yours" is all over google

    Good job claiming it as your own though
    Lmfao... This is mine. I wrote it, I have people who can vouch for me. I also sang it and posted it on youtube, want the link? Fucking asshole. The reason It's on google is because I've posted it on youtube before. If you don't think it's mine, good for you. You can suck my cock for all I care.


    EDIT: I just checked on google... and it's not ANYWHERE kid. It's only on one youtube post. THAT'S MY VIDEO ASSHOLE. Want proof? I'll even add a comment that says "MADE BY THIEVING EH OF MPGH" Fuck you for accusing me of stealing. I'm a professional lyricist... Sorry if my stuff is good? Asshole.
    Last edited by Hysteria; 07-17-2010 at 06:25 PM.

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    A. I don't need your respect....

    B. Is, I don't think it's good.

    C. is there is a ton of material on the net which matches it, or is very close and this section is full of such.

    However, if it is completely yours or partly, that's fine, I don't care, I have made mistakes before, but really the way your acting lacks any real sign of professionalism in anything.

    Plus your Sig says "Even though I proved" You made your sig then you provided 'Proof' , This is my first comment in it's regards whatsoever.

    Relax already.

    All you had to do was provide proof, and I would have retracted with a apology.

    I will admit the extreme possibility that I was wrong, but the way you handled it leaves me with no want to completely apologize.

    It's not anywhere kid
    1. Not a kid.

    2.
    I am assuming you know which sites you posted this to?

    Youtube (yours)

    http://www.youtube.com/user/FIawedDesign

    then

    In a google search

    Rain | Anniversary Poems
    Jul 18, 2010 ... I see problems growing everywhere like vines Of a poison ivy plant creepin up our spines We know its there but we neglect it like a fetus Like when we look to the stars and forget about Cetus Noone seems to give a shit anymore about the world we live in And everyones disrespectin hindi poems about ...
    anniversary-poems.com/tag/rain/ - 8 minutes ago
    happy 5 months poem | Anniversary Poems

    May 23, 2010 ... LYRICS: I see problems growing everywhere like vines, Of a posion ivy plant creepin' up our spines. We know it's there, but we neglect it ...
    anniversary-poems.com/happy-5-months-poem/ - Cached
    Hubby pushing her toward old flames, but why? - Worldnews.com

    Jun 23, 2010 ... LYRICS: I see problems growing everywhere like vines, Of a posion ivy plant creepin' up our spines. We know it's there, but we neglect it ...
    article.wn.com/.../Hubby_pushing_her_toward_old_flames_but_why/ - Cached
    Uncertainty rules life in flood zones - Worldnews.com

    Jun 26, 2010 ... LYRICS: I see problems growing everywhere like vines, Of a posion ivy plant creepin' up our spines. We know it's there, but we neglect it ...
    article.wn.com/view/2010/.../Uncertainty_rules_life_in_flood_zones/ - Cached


    Very likely all yours.

    In either case, again. Relax

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    daym he got owned but i dont do that stuff next gen and u know it so everything i do it straight mine and mine only =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by NextGen1 View Post
    A. I don't need your respect....

    B. Is, I don't think it's good.

    C. is there is a ton of material on the net which matches it, or is very close and this section is full of such.

    However, if it is completely yours or partly, that's fine, I don't care, I have made mistakes before, but really the way your acting lacks any real sign of professionalism in anything.

    Plus your Sig says "Even though I proved" You made your sig then you provided 'Proof' , This is my first comment in it's regards whatsoever.

    Relax already.

    All you had to do was provide proof, and I would have retracted with a apology.

    I will admit the extreme possibility that I was wrong, but the way you handled it leaves me with no want to completely apologize.



    1. Not a kid.

    2.
    I am assuming you know which sites you posted this to?

    Youtube (yours)

    YouTube - Kanaal van FIawedDesign

    then

    In a google search

    Rain | Anniversary Poems
    Jul 18, 2010 ... I see problems growing everywhere like vines Of a poison ivy plant creepin up our spines We know its there but we neglect it like a fetus Like when we look to the stars and forget about Cetus Noone seems to give a shit anymore about the world we live in And everyones disrespectin hindi poems about ...
    anniversary-poems.com/tag/rain/ - 8 minutes ago
    happy 5 months poem | Anniversary Poems

    May 23, 2010 ... LYRICS: I see problems growing everywhere like vines, Of a posion ivy plant creepin' up our spines. We know it's there, but we neglect it ...
    anniversary-poems.com/happy-5-months-poem/ - Cached
    Hubby pushing her toward old flames, but why? - Worldnews.com

    Jun 23, 2010 ... LYRICS: I see problems growing everywhere like vines, Of a posion ivy plant creepin' up our spines. We know it's there, but we neglect it ...
    article.wn.com/.../Hubby_pushing_her_toward_old_flames_but_why/ - Cached
    Uncertainty rules life in flood zones - Worldnews.com

    Jun 26, 2010 ... LYRICS: I see problems growing everywhere like vines, Of a posion ivy plant creepin' up our spines. We know it's there, but we neglect it ...
    article.wn.com/view/2010/.../Uncertainty_rules_life_in_flood_zones/ - Cached


    Very likely all yours.

    In either case, again. Relax



    Sorry for reacting so childishly. I'm just extremely bothered when someone accuses me of stealing my material. You didn't need to flat out accuse me like you did... you could have simply asked if it was mine or not, and I would have told you + proof. I'm dealing with a girlfriend with cancer, a friend on murder charges he didn't commit, and a broken fucking leg all at the same time. Excuse me for being a loose cannon... It just really annoys me when I spend time and effort on writing something, and I get called a fake right out of the gate.
    Hysteria: On 2k Ban. Mkay.


    "And our hearts have all been beaten and bruised, and we're all pretty confused, and we always expect to lose; I'll explain it all to you through alkyhol and bad tattoos. If I talk and I laugh too loud, it's cause I'm trying to forget I'm sad, because things can get pretty bad, but I'd like to believe that somewhere I'll find someone who's going nowhere and we'll go there together."

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    ok i like it man i take back what i said its actualy pretty good =) took me a min to understand thats why but its good tho

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg12345 View Post
    ok i like it man i take back what i said its actualy pretty good =) took me a min to understand thats why but its good tho
    K.

    /short
    Hysteria: On 2k Ban. Mkay.


    "And our hearts have all been beaten and bruised, and we're all pretty confused, and we always expect to lose; I'll explain it all to you through alkyhol and bad tattoos. If I talk and I laugh too loud, it's cause I'm trying to forget I'm sad, because things can get pretty bad, but I'd like to believe that somewhere I'll find someone who's going nowhere and we'll go there together."

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