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    Fuck Love

    We had everything we put some much time into us
    Not just be broken apart for no reason
    I would my world just be to with you again
    I would do anything, anything to be with you.
    But yeat I come back time and time again just to be thrown away again
    Every time I see you it’s hard
    I remember all the times I held you and loved you.
    Why did we have to part because you seen something in me that wasn’t there
    I would never do anything to hurt you
    you know that you just couldn’t see it.
    But now I know now it was only a fairy tale, there’s no such thing as a happy ending
    Now your life is hopeless you’re alone begging for mercy begging for someone to be there
    You had someone but you lost me when walked away.

    not finshed but almost please rate out of 10.

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    thats fucking awesome
    Everybody wanting to post in crossfire section read these
    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/175-crossf...-5-2011-a.html

    EX.

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    you really think so?

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    yeh it fucking owns 10/10
    Everybody wanting to post in crossfire section read these
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    Silly child
    Its okay, it feels cliche.
    Spice it up a bit. something that's not normal within poems / lil stories like this
    show some personal stuff that you're comfortable saying
    <3 good luck with your love life.
    Im taking a break from girls for a while. too much drama in my rep.


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    its good but could u post the time sig or sumtin to define tha beat 7.6/10
    Dont add casin0.1 not my account anymore got keylogged.

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