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    Perfect man, im not.

    Iím nothing more than human
    I try my best to please you, I try my best not to hurt you
    Iím so alone I just want someone to hold to tell me it will all be fine.
    Would you hold me if you knew my pain
    Would you tell me everything is going to be fine.
    Too much time without you tears me apart it drives me crazy
    I never want to let go of you just give me another chance.
    Would you ever notice me if I was perfect
    Would you even notice me if I was like everybody else
    I wish I was perfect so you would see me
    I want to be the person you love
    The person to bring you up when you are at your lowest
    The person to stick up and fights for you and pick you back of the ground.

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    good meaning just not a rap more of a free verse poem still 10000/10 dude good job

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    thanks heaps man.

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    i don't like it very much.


    might be because i'm a picky reader.

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    Nice way to put the words

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