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    this is a song i made but it might suck coz om only 12

    Fallen angel
    Please reach for the skyy-ii-yy reach for the sky-iiiiii-yiii
    please dont let me drop oh god u let me drop even tho i asked
    you2 plz save me from this emptineesssssssssssssss
    why didnt u save me from this emptyineeesssssssssssssss
    buuuut now that im deadddd its time to embrace god and
    be a,
    FALLEN ANGELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
    IM YOUR FALLEN ANGEL
    IM YOUR FALLEN ANGEL
    imyour fallen angel
    im your fallen angel

    i walk out onto the street and all i seem to see its ppl goin nowhere
    exepectin everybodys sympathy now im goin thru the motion of scripted destiny
    i just need to find somewhere to sleep.

    NOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH IM not GUNNA BE YOUR F!@%%$ FALLEN ANGEL
    IM NOT YOUR FALLEN ANGEL IM NOt UR FALLEN ANGEL IM NOT UR FALLEN ANGEL
    DONT WANNA BE UR FALLEN ANGEL NO MORE U
    u can find someone else to do this fucking shit wiht nooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooh
    im not ur fallen angel no more im not u f ing fallen angel no more
    not ur fallen angel not ur fallen angel
    Last edited by DjSanta67; 09-29-2010 at 06:39 AM.

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    If you're going to drag words, please list a beat or what not to go along with this, as i don't know the:
    Tempo, Key, or even the notes that the extended vowels/consonants are hitting.
    If you have a beat / instrumental of a song. list it and i'll see if this is a good set of lyrics. seems a bit religious
    like Smooth Christian rock


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    yah kinda il se bout dat beat

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    GTFO you 12 year old.

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    Quote Originally Posted by F-U-ALL View Post
    GTFO you 12 year old.
    go jump on a d1ck bro

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    LMFAO THAT WAS THE GAYEST SHIT I EVER READ IN MY FKIN LIFE

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    i agree with mister ex-president...

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    Take your gay poetry to the gorfags.

    They loooove it.

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    gee you guys are so slack to the kid
    it might be shit but at least he has the guts to post "the shit" and show everyone.. as well as take the large amount of criticism
    instead of complaining about it's level of "shitness" you could instead help him out like Jab did.

    But really, you're 12.. stop swearing....
    * i also seriously dislike F U ALL ... he is one agro mtherfker
    Last edited by H3ARTbreaker; 10-01-2010 at 08:06 AM.


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    Lyrically not bad, Like to hear some beats as well.

    @ F-U-ALL, I already don't like you, Watch the flames. (because I have sen you flaming in just about every post...)

    @Statistic, Same applies, Watch the flames, Constructive criticism, decide what you don't like, lay it out, that is all that is needed.


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    ehhh i thot it wont the best iv read but not the worst by a long shot and F-U all ur bad so dont tell someone that their shit when your horrible ok it makes you look bad aight

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    Be nice to the kid or don't post k?
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    Shut the fuck up insane you pussy bitch.
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    Shut the fuck up kid, everything that comes out of your mouth sounds retarded as fuck.

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