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    A love rap. ( Please read Sort of long )

    Woah, woah , woah whats with this L-O-V-E
    Is it like what i type on my keyboard, A key?
    No i didnt know it was like this.
    My heart is pounding while i fall into the abyss.
    Now tell me what is this thing you call love.
    Is it something you put on to wear, A glove?
    I dont know what this thing is but after awhile i feel a kiss.
    As i see what your doing i fall into my pure bliss.
    A smile on my face and i look at yours.
    As i see your face you take me on the grand tour.
    Uh.. I see stuff that you cant see so i skip it.
    Yeah were done and it only took a bit.
    Now i see what true love is, Yeah love.
    Now she is in disgrace and gives me a shove.
    What are you doing, I ask as she packs her bag.
    She says " I cant stay with you your just a fag".
    My heart crumbles into pieces.
    Now i get to see this picture, It of my neice.
    She remind's me of my love for her.
    Now i am in rage.
    I'm standing on the stage.
    Mic in my hand and I'm staring at her.
    I notice, She never cared.
    She wants my money.
    I run, she gives me a look that seems funny.
    Now i cry in pain.
    I am done now, i lay in vain.
    I wake up I'm in the hospital.
    I see that there is something logical.
    The girl comes up and says i have 5 days left to live.
    I say "what?" and she says your heart is broken.
    And i now see that this is how love is spoken.
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    wow?
    you were talkin shit on me
    that was straight lame
    one syllabyle rhymes
    everything you just said is probably in a jay z album
    great job you clone with no skill

    you're like a nerd who sucks on mainstream raps dick n wants to be a rapper
    homie back the fuck down before i do somethin like make a video and rip you the fuck up

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    Derp. You think your better than me?
    hold on.

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    aye i can't believe you ripped me
    i nearly pee-d
    but you're so shit i came right back
    and hit you in the sack
    that's right, your girlfriends got such a small rack
    even my butt could punch a bigger pack
    you wanna smack?
    get fucked, that's not all you lack
    you don't got jack
    and that's why you're so slack
    go and wank
    and i'll go pull a practical prank
    don't forget i'm always the higher rank

    ? i spent like 5 minutes on this man


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    Quote Originally Posted by _InstincT View Post
    aye i can't believe you ripped me
    i nearly pee-d
    but you're so shit i came right back
    and hit you in the sack
    that's right, your girlfriends got such a small rack
    even my butt could punch a bigger pack
    you wanna smack?
    get fucked, that's not all you lack
    you don't got jack
    and that's why you're so slack
    go and wank
    and i'll go pull a practical prank
    don't forget i'm always the higher rank

    ? i spent like 5 minutes on this man
    I don't know who you are but i didn't ask for you to reply just to rate.

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    i got bored after glove..
    idk wtf this is
    i just found it in art and gave it a shove
    so don't start to piss..


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