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    Gently [Free Verse Poem/Rap] - Long

    Inspired By recent tragic events.

    Accompanied By this Beautiful Instrumental, That continues to play in my mind.

    [YOUTUBE]e99Y07CuwlY[/YOUTUBE]



    * Simply A Free verse/Modified Rap.



    ____________________________________________

    Gently.


    When the ambiance of apathy encompasses us
    And the Mist slowly clears
    In a distant world
    I can see you intertwined with
    A shadow of me besides your side
    My heart beating into my chest
    Am I dead or am I dreaming?
    As the music continues playing
    A soft melody caresses the air
    The lyrics we wrote in this book
    Defining who we are
    Staring blindly as we walk along
    Unaware of our lives passing by
    I see her tears, and it tears me inside
    I don’t know why…
    I once tasted her love
    Just to watch it fall apart
    Took your hand to walk this road

    _________


    Looking up into the stars
    Sometimes all you need is hope
    When everything else crashes and falls down on us
    It’s time to pick those pieces of life we shattered
    No use in putting the past back together
    Its time to create something new
    A life with one another
    The hand that guides me
    Stroking my face
    Crystal words fall from my eyes
    Melting into the pool of a broken heart
    Her laugh in my head
    Her smile in the sky
    Her whispers dance with the trees
    Inside he dies

    _________


    Quickly the world has swallowed any
    Hope of my emotions
    Circles upon circles in a cycle of life
    Ending where we began
    Cold and naked into the world
    Penetrated by its corruption
    The frozen droplets of dew, and your cold breath
    Extinguish the candles
    Here your head once lay
    I close my eyes
    Where is life taking us?
    Is there a use to this paradox?
    How many bullets does it take to die?
    Surrealism creeping into the seams of my reality
    A cruelness beyond measure, yet we push on
    Inspired by those memories
    Your presence far outlives your existence
    For every captured soul
    We send out letters to the dead
    Anguish within the confines of our mind
    To those thoughts never heard
    Where do they go?
    Those prayers never answered
    Silent to an unforgiving god
    Exhaling , In His Final Battle
    The Ink slowly drying by his hand…



    I'd like to dedicate/ Thank the following people for their impact on my life now; Chris, Vincent, Viibez, Rob, Mohavid, Cameron, Dave, Ryan, Swift And Jordan. It's Time To Start Looking towards tomorrow.
    Last edited by Evelyn; 09-29-2010 at 09:35 PM.

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    You put my name at the end /YAY

    This will be news

    Me in something /
    I'm back.

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    Thank you for enlightening my day.

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    thats really good eve!
    Still love you Giggletron


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    You put a smile on my face everyday Eve




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    Not bad, sounds like a song.





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    Made my day a lot better, thanks Eve.
    Lub you.

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    I liked it a lot, the instrumental fits the lyrics almost perfectly.
    Outstanding !


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