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    ECsTaSYRap Made By Me.

    haters will make me famous(by me) i wont stop ha
    every fuckin day i post something u all be vs me and be around me like a ring,i wont give up i will fuck ur minds up with no rub,say i am the worst say i am ugly u r fugly i will fuck u with my dugly!!i meant my dick u stupid prick i wont give ur opinion any respect!! i am proud of myself so fuck everybody else diss me but u wont piss me i love rap so fuck me fuck u fuck yall so same bitch same asshole!! hate my rhyme but 1 day it will be my time to shine yea yea i am from Spain u think i live in a tent and ridin in a camel and dont know mtv channelbut motherfucker i own the world controll panel,i know my english is crap but i am learnin and burnin improvin and movin if u r jealous then u hate me but u cant rate me as tupac said only god can judge me so write ur opinion on a paper and wet it and spit on it and put it in ur ass and sit on smashed glass and burn urself with gas!!

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    You know, As mediocre as the lyrics were, This actually has a really nice flow to it. O.o

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    proper spelling would of made this better.


    other than that it's okay...

    considering i don't listen to much rap.

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    Thanks Eqlipse6

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    ehhh crapy shitty but real nice flow just need alot of work on the LYRICS part ALOT other then that nice

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    this reminds me of Marshall flow really liked it , keep goin ,btw the lyrics in ur sig say im from Egypt and the one in the post says u are from Spain , and your flag is saying u are from canada .... are u incognito?
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    Flow is good, the rest needs WORK

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    not just one paragraph

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    nice work .

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    Daum dude this is good .

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    I like the flow, spelling aside that was great. Most people here dont have any flow

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    That shit was garbage, dont ever use tupac in your rhymes. You know nothing about him nor anything about rap. I think hooked on phonics can you help you with that. <3 fail

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