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    At Peace At Last {Freeverse}

    Well, Lately I can't seem to describe how I feel, And this Poem was written this night without myself being conscious of it. To what it's meaning is, I have no idea, Yet it is how I feel.



    Accompanying Photography {By Me}







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    An invisible illusion, Lost in your world
    Her spirit, a feather in the wind
    A fragile memory easily broken
    The fantasies of “What could have been”
    To the questions of “Why was it”
    This is the silence, after the storm
    That tore her sanity apart
    Gently, the trickle of life leaves her body
    As she innocently caresses the droplets of blood
    Her secret sins, which remained unsaid
    Every emotion, forced to keep to herself
    Dreams project, from her eyes
    Begin to slowly pierce your flesh
    Muffled screams which remained unheard
    To anyone, but echoed in her mind
    Playfully tears dance at her cheeks
    Elegantly slipping to her unkissed lips
    Yet life in its beauty continues on
    Beyond the individual, beyond her
    New romance, New friendships
    New agony , New heartbreaks
    As her exhausted body lies as before
    On that cold rosewood floor
    The sweetness of sunlight
    Laps at the edges of her skin
    Serenity's warm embrace releases her
    Harmonized at last, one with the universe
    Resonance of those haunting nights
    Spent alone with a single prayer
    The luminance seeps from her body
    Another shadow left for dead
    Her soul, At peace at last.

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    I as usual want to extend a thank you to my dearest friends, whom at this point should know who they are, I sincerely love you each.


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    was touched with these lyrics.
    Love em.

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    This is beautiful Eve.
    I love your work, both literary art and graphic art.

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    This is very well written..
    I really only found one verse that didn't seem to make sense.

    "Elegantly slipping to her unkissed lips"
    Is the tear elegant? If this is what you were referring to,
    How can a tear be elegant?

    Other than that, I really enjoyed this.
    You have a way of expressing detail.
    As I read it, I had some mental images to go along with it.
    Great work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post
    This is very well written..
    I really only found one verse that didn't seem to make sense.

    "Elegantly slipping to her unkissed lips"
    Is the tear elegant? If this is what you were referring to,
    How can a tear be elegant?

    Other than that, I really enjoyed this.
    You have a way of expressing detail.
    As I read it, I had some mental images to go along with it.
    Great work.
    The way that the tear is slipping is elegant, But I understand.


    Thank You <3 It means a lot to me that someone likes my weird poetry.