Cool, i guess my only advice is, don't worry about rhymes and write about what you know or experiences etc, people can usually tell if what you are writing about is fake or not. If you put yourself into your writing it shows in your words.
i just made one yesterday... i tried to make it kinda comedically but i guess i failed.
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