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    A poem about Insomnia

    a poem about insomnia, wrote it 7:46am.

    Insomnia~
    My insomnia oppressed me,
    far beyond my mind can see,
    deep down i feel to bland,
    coming to realize my life is a sham,
    so i look around my empty apartment,
    realizing that my sleepless nights have gone forgotten,
    i do not know why my nights are restless,
    but i do know my mine is restless,
    the ponders about life and my sorrows,
    to face the facts that nobody follows,
    the things i say or the things i do,
    because in the end i stink of poo.




    whatcyha think?

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    i didn't bump this.




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    Well lol, what to say... I think proof reading is king lol. That being said you could put into words a real essence of what is like to not succumb to sleep as easily as most people, I myself suffer from insomnia, so ik its not easy, to lay there at all hours, just wishing you could sleep like a normal human being, looking around you in the hopes that something will give you the inspiration and the relief you seek. So truly its all about the essence behind the words and not the words itself that matter... if that makes any sense to you lol.


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    I have the key to Insomnia. Research Lucid Dreaming. Read the Bible.
    Then drink a Pint of Irish whiskey. Sweet dreams.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post
    I have the key to Insomnia. Research Lucid Dreaming. Read the Bible.
    Then drink a Pint of Irish whiskey. Sweet dreams.
    the bible?

    i get the hint of you saying it's boring

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