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    [First Attempt] Terminal [Please Read]

    Hey, this is my first attempt. Its raw and fully unedited. Its also not finished yet. I will be adding Part II and a revised version later. Please Rate and Comment! Thanks!

    Terminal


    Me: “Hey Doc”
    Me: “Whats wrong?”
    Doctor: “Its terminal....”

    My life flashes right before my eyes
    This isn’t another lie
    My breathing slows
    There aint no more flow
    There isn’t anything we can do
    At least for you

    Make my way back home
    What do I say?
    Im sorry honey daddys going away?
    God damn these words break bones
    And these bones cannot heal
    Not from the pain and sorrow of this whole ordeal
    But this shit isn't another story, this shit is real
    What the hell am I supposed to feel?

    All I can say is to live life to the fullest
    I know this shit sounds like some cliché
    But you never know if its your day
    I guess you can only pray
    I only wish I could stay

    Its time to think
    Stop being selfish
    Cause time ticks away, Im on the brink
    But I cant think of bills, when Im busy writing my will
    But there is so little I leave behind
    How can I leave them chomping at the rind?
    Scrapping for anything they can find

    Is this the life I imagined?
    How did it come to this?
    I just cant even fathom
    If it wasn't for my anger and fists
    Maybe I wouldn't be locked up, let my life slip away
    I guess all I can do is just hope and pray
    For a new hope and a better day

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    *Update/Revised*
    Tell me if you like it better or not. Thanks. Stay tuned for Part II The End.


    Me: Hey Doc.
    Me: Whats wrong?
    Doctor: Its terminal.....

    My life flashes, right before my eyes
    This aint another lie
    My chest tightens, breathing slows
    There aint no more flow
    There aint nothing we can do
    At least for you

    Make my way home
    Why do I say?
    I’m sorry honey, Daddy’s going away?
    God damn, these words break bones
    And the bones cannot heal
    Not from the pain and sorrow of this whole ordeal
    But this aint another story, this shit is real
    What the hell am I supposed to feel!?

    Its time to think
    Stop being selfish
    Time ticks away, I’m on the brink
    Just about to sink
    I can’t think of bills, when I’m busy writing wills
    There is so little I leave behind
    How can I leave them chomping at the rind?
    Scrapping for anything and everything they can find

    Is this the life I imagined?
    How did it come to this?
    How did I let it all slip away?
    16, on top of the world, at the head of the pack
    It all happened so fast, there was no time to react
    God damn!

    So little time left
    To repent all of my sins, to repent my lies and thefts
    I just wish I could stay
    I guess all I can do is hope and pray
    For a new a better day

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    4 words: you are a god, imma make a custum beat for this man. really good
    hey guys i made my very first youtube video and i'dlike to know what you think and how i could improve it or what features i can add, you're the best MPGH, props to all of you


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    haha thanks dude! We should make a single together. I have a little experience singing, and you can make the beat. do you wanna make the chorus? add my MSN gmgarrett00@hotmail.com

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    awww mannn this is sick!

    love it

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    thanks bro!

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    *Update*

    Chorus:


    Cause I’m nearing the end
    A crack unable to mend
    Just about to break
    Its beginning to feel like fate
    So its time, to move on
    No more dreams to call upon
    But its days like this, that you only wish you could stay
    Just let go, and fade away

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    gud 1.........
    Originally Said By komakazee:
    ill give u a runescape account with 99 fishing for ur paypal account

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    Thanks bra

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    *facepalm*, i expected modern warfare 2

    oh well, this isjust as good

    3 years ago, I was hacking/playing Combat Arms thinking it was the best FPS ever made. Now, I own Black Ops, Modern Warfare 2, Bad Company 2 and Quantum of Solace. Every time I play COD, it all comes down to skill from Combat Arms.
    Quote Originally Posted by AVGN
    i read your sig,

    and its true, playing against SO many hackers in CA

    increases your skill against legit player in other games!
    Sure... Thats what i meant

    And when I play Combat Arms now, I play better because the other games have taught me to watch for campers
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    What? ^

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    Ohhh Terminal, thanks bro!

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