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    Question Hard Times

    There comes a day with hard lines so desperate without
    nights come screaming at you like a dry deserted drought
    family's left ya seems like your alone in this cold world
    no place to call home. no where to go no,
    you feel like you're drenched with love and satisfaction
    but you never know if that would mean matted with fake
    layers subdued within. pores hungry reaching out with help
    days with helpless minds had dealt.
    preposterous lives had left they're sanity that have melted
    into the same mind once more.

    It's hard times recognize that life isn't easy every time
    have to look up to find courage in the sky
    and hope you'll make it another life.


    Cold winters Sad Summers mommy's in the kitchen fighting over supper then daddy gets raged pulls out a knife who would of known this would be the woman's last sight blood dripping horrendous as the anger disappears, over come with grief sadness and a whole lot of fear. child watching at the window with no emotion soever with no sorrow. you see daddy taught the child how to be bitter with no love for his mother. Its not every day that we see this time of year. the time to kill and yearn for fear.
    The child's life is scarred for ever. Lifeless drainage whenever. Something that daddy never forgets but something that he will always regret.

    It's hard times recognize that life isn't easy every time
    have to look up to find courage in the sky
    and hope you'll make it another life.

    Salute to the veterans respect to all the women and men in the army
    desperately fighting for their oh so brave country. which i truly believe is corrupt but we still have the army to stand up. even in hard times they still stand there like an immovable mountain that's right here, courage riled inside them like a category 3 hurricane. bravery already inside them from the day they experienced pain, Its not an easy sight to see another fallen soldier dying at your knees with hope in this world with one last smile. but the family still cries all the worthwhile.

    It's hard times recognize that life isn't easy every time
    have to look up to find courage in the sky
    and hope you'll make it another life.
    And never die a desperate lie cause its people who wanna make this |dream die.


    [Notes] Yes this was a freestyle and i meant it from the bottom of my heart
    hope you feel it too.

    Plz reply
    Last edited by ghon70; 11-24-2010 at 12:48 PM.

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    glad to see its patriotic too

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    not a freestyle if you wrote it down XD but flow wasnt that good lyricaly avg 7.8/10 good job keep it up and you get alot better =)

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    Flow---

    the text is all messed up the flow isnt looking right on the forum
    but i have the right flow and its fast. so thats all wrong.
    anyways would like to rap battle you
    looking foward to it.