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    [Text] Haze VS. Linked³

    This is the first round of the Text Portion of the Rap tournament!


    Rules;

    200 Characters Minimum

    800 Characters Maximum

    Three "Rounds / Turns" Per person - Unless You Give Up

    48 Hours to Respond Or "Check-In"

    Lyrics must be Original, Any Plagiarism will disqualify you.



    Judging Will Start after The "Three Rounds" have been completed, There will be a form to fill out.


    Haze Begins.

    Good Luck!

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    Oh yeah, forgot about checking in.

    Nearly done (h)

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    Hey dude you ain't on the street yo
    Will you beat me? thats a no
    I'm in here waiting
    making something you ain't wanting
    i see you making
    While i'm in here relaxing
    I'm like Obama
    while you there cry to your mama
    Don't even think of winning
    because later you'd be hating


    beat that

    Strygwyr, the Bloodseeker
    "For the Flayed Twins, I seek blood."





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    lol. haze is supposed to start. but not bad

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    forgot lol
    Can haze be 2nd?
    please evelyn

    Strygwyr, the Bloodseeker
    "For the Flayed Twins, I seek blood."





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    Sure, that "First" Thing is just so we don't spend 5 days arguing over who starts.


    Good luck guys!

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    This is just round one,
    by the end you'll be done,
    ill be crowned the king and this shit will be won.
    I'm linked in with this flow,
    the words just come out, like the smoke from this dro.
    Dont even respond,
    because my shit is beyond,
    me compared to you? it just doesnt correspond.

    Beat you? I'll beat you off like MJ
    I mean your weak ass rhymes, but I know you like it that way
    The words in your raps, they just scream out "GAY!"
    But don't fret, don't worry because you arent alone
    I know a couple of other guys who like a good bone
    They'll be *ring ring ringing* your one inch like a telephone
    Just go home and stop,
    Your life is a flop,
    Because the thing you're not
    Is where I am.. at the top.

    u.

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    OMG I WANT INTHIS SHIT XD

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    Quote Originally Posted by Haze View Post
    This is just round one,
    by the end you'll be done,
    ill be crowned the king and this shit will be won.
    I'm linked in with this flow,
    the words just come out, like the smoke from this dro.
    Dont even respond,
    because my shit is beyond,
    me compared to you? it just doesnt correspond.

    Beat you? I'll beat you off like MJ
    I mean your weak ass rhymes, but I know you like it that way
    The words in your raps, they just scream out "GAY!"
    But don't fret, don't worry because you arent alone
    I know a couple of other guys who like a good bone
    They'll be *ring ring ringing* your one inch like a telephone
    Just go home and stop,
    Your life is a flop,
    Because the thing you're not
    Is where I am.. at the top.

    u.
    Orly your a king?
    I thought only you were a janitor in burger king
    Why you smoking
    to get over this "Thing"?
    Your shit is beyond
    Your Shit? it makes me not to respond

    Why u mad bro
    Oh you've been smoking dro
    Your worse than McBullshit
    Even though i just created that shit
    I just did something nice , I Suggest you run before you are sliced
    Who cares about the top?
    Really i will backstab you in the back
    I Will win this fight
    to get my spotlight


    Oooh you're good

    Strygwyr, the Bloodseeker
    "For the Flayed Twins, I seek blood."





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    postin rap soooooooon

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    u Both have the same problem.

    Eg:


    "They'll be *ring ring ringing* your one inch like a telephone
    Just go home and stop,"

    When u swap the last word "telephone" + "stop" make it blend, all in all nice use of vocab ;D

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    when will this continue?

    Strygwyr, the Bloodseeker
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    Quote Originally Posted by iRateIslam View Post
    u Both have the same problem.

    Eg:


    "They'll be *ring ring ringing* your one inch like a telephone
    Just go home and stop,"

    When u swap the last word "telephone" + "stop" make it blend, all in all nice use of vocab ;D
    Who made you the grammar master
    I bet i could correct better than you, and faster
    your grammar is so bad
    you sound like a girl i once had
    I dumped her after i saw her
    shavin' her lower lip fur
    she was so nasty
    she sounded like you at a party
    correcting grammar
    like you held the supreme hammer
    all i'm saying is
    compared to me your grammar is piss.