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    Understand [Free Verse Poem]



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    Well, last night after several recent events I decided I could no longer contain my emotions, so these words spewed from mind to keyboard.... Here's the result of incoherent thoughts and oppressed feelings;

    Accompanying Instrumental


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    Recommendation : Skip to 0:40 Then Read.


    Understand – Evelyn

    Defining perfection based on your standards
    Replacing reality with your beliefs
    Nothing but another object
    A modern day convenience
    Do as master commands
    A tinge of humanity still glimmers
    In between those bruises
    A single tear betrays
    Emotions that lie behind
    Manipulated into submission
    A longing for acceptance
    Never answered by superiors
    Misunderstood due to isolation
    Intentions floating on Angelic wings
    Applications are futile
    Loneliness that plagues the soul
    Those whom she loves
    Incite the greatest pain
    Vulnerability she can not hide
    Exposed all the same
    Insanity it seems, is seconds away
    As every moment another
    Breathe is lost
    Another rain drop falls
    Ashamed of her impurities
    She longs to make them happy
    Your ridicules fill the air
    She isn’t as you are
    Her hope is useless
    As her resistance once was
    She wants to be strong
    To break away
    To tell you she’s sorry
    Yet unseen chains still hold her
    His cold touch still grasps her
    She clings onto that last glimpse
    Her memories play right
    Before her eyes
    Over and over she reminisces
    A perfect circle she drew
    In every word an encryption
    Until then, She Loves You.
    Last edited by Evelyn; 12-11-2010 at 01:00 PM.

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    So beautiful, but so sad

    An amazing poem, I really love it

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    great poem eve. loved it
    Still love you Giggletron


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    Quote Originally Posted by Evelyn View Post


    About

    Well, last night after several recent events I decided I could no longer contain my emotions, so these words spewed from mind to keyboard.... Here's the result of incoherent thoughts and oppressed feelings;

    Accompanying Instrumental


    [youtube]bcd2Q8WxgQs[tube]
    Recommendation : Skip to 0:40 Then Read.


    Understand – Evelyn

    Defining perfection based on your standards
    Replacing reality with your beliefs
    Nothing but another object
    A modern day convenience
    Do as master commands
    A tinge of humanity still glimmers
    In between those bruises
    A single tear betrays
    Emotions that lie behind
    Manipulated into submission
    A longing for acceptance
    Never answered by superiors
    Misunderstood due to isolation
    Intentions floating on Angelic wings
    Applications are futile
    Loneliness that plagues the soul
    Those whom she loves
    Incite the greatest pain
    Vulnerability she can not hide
    Exposed all the same
    Insanity it seems, is seconds away
    As every moment another
    Breathe is lost
    Another rain drop falls
    Ashamed of her impurities
    She longs to make them happy
    Your ridicules fill the air
    She isn’t as you are
    Her hope is useless
    As her resistance once was
    She wants to be strong
    To break away
    To tell you she’s sorry
    Yet unseen chains still hold her
    His cold touch still grasps her
    She clings onto that last glimpse
    Her memories play right
    Before her eyes
    Over and over she reminisces
    A perfect circle she drew
    In every word an encryption
    Until then, She Loves You.
    The best thing i have ever read, wow...this is A* piece of work.

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    Pretty nice poem.