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    [Text] Insane VS Balls Out

    This is the first round of the Text Portion of the Rap tournament!


    Rules;

    200 Characters Minimum

    800 Characters Maximum

    Three "Rounds / Turns" Per person - Unless You Give Up

    48 Hours to Respond Or "Check-In"

    Lyrics must be Original, Any Plagiarism will disqualify you.



    Judging Will Start after The "Three Rounds" have been completed, There will be a form to fill out.


    Insane Begins.


    Good Luck!

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    100% Original

    Dear Stan, I meant to write you sooner but I just been busy
    You said your girlfriend's pregnant now, how far along is she?
    Look, I'm really flattered you would call your daughter that
    and here's an autograph for your brother,
    I wrote it on the Starter cap
    I'm sorry I didn't see you at the show, I musta missed you
    Don't think I did that shit intentionally just to diss you
    But what's this shit you said about you like to cut your wrists too?
    I say that shit just clowning dog,
    c'mon - how fucked up is you?
    You got some issues Stan, I think you need some counseling
    to help your ass from bouncing off the walls when you get down some
    And what's this shit about us meant to be together?
    That type of shit'll make me not want us to meet each other
    I really think you and your girlfriend need each other
    or maybe you just need to treat her better
    I hope you get to read this letter, I just hope it reaches you in time
    before you hurt yourself, I think that you'll be doin just fine
    if you relax a little, I'm glad I inspire you but Stan
    why are you so mad? Try to understand, that I do want you as a fan
    I just don't want you to do some crazy shit
    I seen this one shit on the news a couple weeks ago that made me sick
    Some dude was drunk and drove his car over a bridge
    and had his girlfriend in the trunk, and she was pregnant with his kid
    and in the car they found a tape, but they didn't say who it was to
    Come to think about, his name was.. it was you
    Damn!
    Insane
    Ex Middleman
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    PM|VM]
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    Quote Originally Posted by Boombox View Post
    Shut the fuck up insane you pussy bitch.
    Quote Originally Posted by arunforce View Post
    Shut the fuck up kid, everything that comes out of your mouth sounds retarded as fuck.

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    Hey guys, so sorry. I have had massive problems with access to the site and I thought that I didn't get in after a couple weeks of no reply. Gonna start working now, sorry!!

    Sorry to keep ya waiting
    I was busy masturbating
    But better late than never
    Spitting rhymes so clever
    Got you trippin harder than vikatan
    Secluded fame, not every man can attain
    After all this aint no Ku Klux Klan
    So what was that stan?
    Try to keep up, 2 girls...1 cup
    Dammit, I guess I lost you
    Might wanna go back and review
    Maybe even learn a thing a to
    My immortal design
    Bottom line, its extraordinary never ordinary, and entirely mine
    Whoah, just went crazy
    Things might start looking a little hazy
    I do what I do
    Never thinking a thing about you
    Or what collateral damage will occur
    Cause I'm prolly trying to incur
    Moving too fast, I'm just a blur
    But don't act like your not impressed
    The things I accomplish
    Without the help of a team
    Your on the verge of cardiac arrest
    And I'm recognizing my dream
    Last edited by Balls Out; 01-01-2011 at 01:31 PM.

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    Nice trolling, Insane.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Insane View Post
    100% Original

    Dear Stan, I meant to write you sooner but I just been busy
    You said your girlfriend's pregnant now, how far along is she?
    Look, I'm really flattered you would call your daughter that
    and here's an autograph for your brother,
    I wrote it on the Starter cap
    I'm sorry I didn't see you at the show, I musta missed you
    Don't think I did that shit intentionally just to diss you
    But what's this shit you said about you like to cut your wrists too?
    I say that shit just clowning dog,
    c'mon - how fucked up is you?
    You got some issues Stan, I think you need some counseling
    to help your ass from bouncing off the walls when you get down some
    And what's this shit about us meant to be together?
    That type of shit'll make me not want us to meet each other
    I really think you and your girlfriend need each other
    or maybe you just need to treat her better
    I hope you get to read this letter, I just hope it reaches you in time
    before you hurt yourself, I think that you'll be doin just fine
    if you relax a little, I'm glad I inspire you but Stan
    why are you so mad? Try to understand, that I do want you as a fan
    I just don't want you to do some crazy shit
    I seen this one shit on the news a couple weeks ago that made me sick
    Some dude was drunk and drove his car over a bridge
    and had his girlfriend in the trunk, and she was pregnant with his kid
    and in the car they found a tape, but they didn't say who it was to
    Come to think about, his name was.. it was you
    Damn!
    eminem - stan
    thats from that song

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    100% troll thread

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    So I win?

    Msg 2 Short

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    Quote Originally Posted by Balls Out View Post
    So I win?

    Msg 2 Short
    you can't win
    your rap shouldda been thrown in the bin
    Insane was trollin ya
    like he does to the women at the bar
    he just lost
    you still gotta cover the cost
    you wasted your time
    trying to build up a rhyme
    he knocked you over,
    till you were Sober
    Like you mum last night
    she didnt even try to fight
    it Sounded like she got told
    Just like you got trolled





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    What you thinkin?
    Tryin to take me on
    Cause I got a hardon
    You can't get within 6 feet
    8 when I skeet
    Ya your girl was pretty sweet
    But shes just a hoe
    And thats all she knows
    Lookin for the next dick to suck
    Or the next good fuck
    Sorry for all the sexuality
    Cause thats not true in reality
    Or maybe at least for you
    Cause you aint got a clue
    What the fuck success tastes like
    Your just a damn dike
    So go ahead, take a hike
    Haha ya I know what you like
    A good bone from another guy
    You play it off like you were high
    But I see you go back for more
    When you come a knockin on the black mans door
    A new definition of whore
    This shits non fictional, aint no lore
    After all the truth hurts
    Cause your just a sick pervert
    Look whos trollin now
    I could never loose, there was never a competition
    So watch me take a bow
    Go ahead look, I give you permission
    Witness my reign
    The girls, money, and fame
    After all the effort, I finally attain
    I just raped ya so hard, your a grade A cripple
    A feat so great, China can feel the ripple
    Left ya lying in the dust
    To die and eventually rust
    Cause its over
    Take it like a man and bend over
    Or just rollover
    Your call

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    dis kids good





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    Quote Originally Posted by Insane View Post
    100% Original

    Dear Stan, I meant to write you sooner but I just been busy
    You said your girlfriend's pregnant now, how far along is she?
    Look, I'm really flattered you would call your daughter that
    and here's an autograph for your brother,
    I wrote it on the Starter cap
    I'm sorry I didn't see you at the show, I musta missed you
    Don't think I did that shit intentionally just to diss you
    But what's this shit you said about you like to cut your wrists too?
    I say that shit just clowning dog,
    c'mon - how fucked up is you?
    You got some issues Stan, I think you need some counseling
    to help your ass from bouncing off the walls when you get down some
    And what's this shit about us meant to be together?
    That type of shit'll make me not want us to meet each other
    I really think you and your girlfriend need each other
    or maybe you just need to treat her better
    I hope you get to read this letter, I just hope it reaches you in time
    before you hurt yourself, I think that you'll be doin just fine
    if you relax a little, I'm glad I inspire you but Stan
    why are you so mad? Try to understand, that I do want you as a fan
    I just don't want you to do some crazy shit
    I seen this one shit on the news a couple weeks ago that made me sick
    Some dude was drunk and drove his car over a bridge
    and had his girlfriend in the trunk, and she was pregnant with his kid
    and in the car they found a tape, but they didn't say who it was to
    Come to think about, his name was.. it was you
    Damn!
    LOLOLOOLOL Stan