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    Cut his dick off.

    Damn you got me in woe,
    your boyfriend's still treating you like shit, you know?

    He can eat what I defecate, while i make him suffocate on the lies that he gives you
    He loves you not, he wants your pussy, that's all he wanted to get into.

    Tying you down, pulling off your angel wings, you're an angel to me,
    but a sex slave to his lying eyes can't you see.

    It's basic and simple, he's a fucking faggot nerdy rat who wants to look good
    because his parents don't give a shit of his lazy ass because doing nothing is all he would.

    You told me, you pity him, that's the main reason you're together
    You want to make him feel good again cuz his ass is torn apart from the girls that did the right thing, cheat on him for better.

    treat him like shit, don't get mistreatment by him,
    get the fuck off his dick and start cutting it like a fucking shim.





    i'm tired, i try to rap, it's fucking 3:40 in the morning, i got finals tomorrow, im tired of my bestfriends boyfriend, it's been 10 months now and he's still lying to her, using her for sex, and tying her down from talking to me. please improve my newphag rap skills.


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    Not bad bro, and sorry to hear that. As for technique, I'm not very good, but I think it would be better if it was a bit shorter, its almost like a poem. Again, not bad at all The following rap does not reflect my opinion.

    You mad bro?
    That I'm constantly fucking your hoe
    Day and Night like Kid CuDi
    Knew that things could get bloody
    So I'm here grinnin
    Cause its war, and I'm winnin
    Slowly tearin you apart from the inside out
    She'll be mine forever, and you'll be lost in self doubt
    At least you tried
    Too bad you almost died
    Cause you just cannot handle
    This cruel sex scandal
    Last edited by Balls Out; 01-06-2011 at 04:44 PM.
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    ye you're right more of a poem than rap.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Balls Out View Post
    Not bad bro, and sorry to hear that. As for technique, I'm not very good, but I think it would be better if it was a bit shorter, its almost like a poem. Again, not bad at all The following rap does not reflect my opinion.

    You mad bro?
    That I'm constantly fucking your hoe
    Day and Night like Kid CuDi
    Knew that things could get bloody
    So I'm here grinnin
    Cause its war, and I'm winnin
    Slowly tearin you apart from the inside out
    She'll be mine forever, and you'll be lost in self doubt
    At least you tried
    Too bad you almost died
    Cause you just cannot handle
    This cruel sex scandal
    I like it. I want moar.

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    lol at ^^ What a douche....Fuck your besties man/

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    Damn, your girl done good
    She really know how to ride that wood
    Knocked it outta the park like Babe Ruth
    But let me lay down the truth
    You and her never gonna be anything more than friends
    Or at least until you start using extends
    Can't see it? Maybe you should check your contact lens
    Cause this shit makes me laugh
    Your like a leper with staph
    But she aint go no more uses
    Tired of thinkin of excuses
    So if you want her so bad
    Its aite, cause she wasn't the best I ever had
    Maybe a five
    Barely stimilated impulse, I've been more alive
    She was just a bitch
    There to scratch an itch
    While it was still there
    Got plenty more, afterall I'm a billionaire
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    BO Rapes all your asses

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    Balls out is

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    The words he rhymed with are so elementary though
    i'm not saying im better, but as a music appreciator, it was basic.


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    Ya bro, they were. These are literally just taking about 10min to write, I really admire a large vocabulary. I'll try to make one using "big boy" words.
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    Appreciate the non-argumentative reply.
    build up on your vocabulary, concept's pretty nice i guess.


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    Ya, I mean, my vocab isn't small. Its just that raps usually don't use large words due to the fact they are incredible hard to rhyme and rap. Poems on the other hand, have much more colorful words instead of hoe and shit.
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