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    TOURNY FEEDBACK PLEASE

    Tell me what you think for rap tournament:

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    Some parts were alright, used "mean" quick a few times. Also, try not to use rhyming words side by side. Try "Ya I'm mean, and like the mother fucking hulk I'm turning green". Certainly not bad though bro, the "I'm the best" kinda made it gay though. Anyways, good work
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    Thanks first good comment about it and yeah the ending i added in after because it need 1:00+

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    Oh ahah, because of youtube or MPGH?

    @Offtopic- how old are you bruh?
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    LMFAOOOOO this kids funny but ill destroy you keep practicing bro

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    Its okay.
    Keep practicing.