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    Living on with your Life...

    People. This is my second poem. Hope you enjoyed it

    We must learn to live on with our lives,
    When someone disappears in our very eyes.

    Nothing can stay forever,
    Only a memory that lingers.

    You drown me with your bluest tears,
    I can't get your noise out of my ears.

    How can I help you my dearest friend?
    I will be your trusty pen.

    As you write your emotions on me,
    I help you like I owe you a deed.

    So don't fall in a endless dream,
    You will only wake during nightmare's regime.

    For those who don't understand the poem [It's not that good ] Here:

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    We must learn to live on with our lives,
    When someone disappears in our very eyes.
    It means when someone die in our lives, we must learn to carry on without them even though it will inflict deep pain.

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    Nothing can stay forever,
    Only a memory that lingers.
    Loved ones can't stay forever, but they're presence in your lives will live on.

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    You drown me with your bluest tears,
    I can't get your noise out of my ears.
    When someone leaves one's life, it's painful for them as they express their emotion with tears, screams, and pain.

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    How can I help you my dearest friend?
    I will be your trusty pen.
    The trusty pen part mean that they can tell their feelings to me or someone.

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    As you write your emotions on me,
    I help you like I owe you a deed.
    As they tell me their feelings, I try to help them as much as I can.
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    So don't fall in a endless dream,
    You will only wake during nightmare's regime.
    This part is telling them not to trigger the memory for they will only react painfully and blue.

    Overall, I'm not sure if this poem was good or if it made sense I'm not the best poet tho

    Hope you guys liked it.

    ~KingDot
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