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    Post Consumes...

    It fuels within me, It swells in my veins,
    This pure red bubbling to the surface, its wrath I cannot evade.
    Its almost too much to bare, it consumes me, I must let it out,
    I must seek solace, this fire is just burning throughout.
    This feeling that I cannot escape,
    This nightmare that seems to have no end.
    The facade of all being right,
    when everything falls apart.
    Innocent people get in the way,
    Words spew out without any dismay,
    So please hear my pleas, hear my cries dear heart of mine.
    Let this fire consume me, and reach its end, turn my spirit once more into a shrine,
    God help me, if you are there at all,
    for these demons wanna take all that is me, my soul.


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    i just realized this is "your" section

    hot lil poem u got thurr

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    just remembered that was you jake


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    Wow Liz

    That's amazaing

    I wish I could use this for my poem for school

    But no. That would be plagiarism

    Good Job Liz. I liked it
    Love you all


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    did you post yours?


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    Quote Originally Posted by Liz View Post
    did you post yours?
    Not yet D:

    My only poems I posted here are:

    Living On with your Life and Hatred.

    I'm almost done D:

    I wonder if my school will think I got it from here MPGH

    O well

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    Awesome poem.. A lot of thought and meaning put into it.. Loved it Wish i had that much creativity.. haha..



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    Thanks... still pretty pissed off.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Liz View Post
    Thanks... still pretty pissed off.
    I posted it
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    Honest.
    A good start for release. Thanks for sharing.
    I've been working on some writing.
    Will post later.

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    I'll never be able to be as good as you Liz
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    Quote Originally Posted by KingDot View Post
    I'll never be able to be as good as you Liz
    keep trying and you just might be someday

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scruffy View Post


    keep trying and you just might be someday
    lulz

    I hight doubt my being better than Liz.

    But thanks Scruff
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