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    [Round 2] Bombsaway707 VS. Balls Out

    This is the second round of the Text Portion of the Rap tournament!


    Rules;

    200 Characters Minimum

    800 Characters Maximum

    Three "Rounds / Turns" Per person - Unless You Give Up

    48 Hours to Respond Or "Check-In"

    Lyrics must be Original, Any Plagiarism will disqualify you.



    Judging Will Start after The "Three Rounds" have been completed, There will be a form to fill out.


    Bombsaway707 Begins.

    Good Luck!

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    Alright son lemme tell it to you straight
    Ill be 10 miles ahead, you still sittin in the starting gate
    This rap game comes easy to me no doubt about that
    and im not even wearin baggy pants or a backwards hat
    even though my skin color may be white
    in this rappin game i shine real bright
    my words will leave you baffled
    your competition to me is just a hassel
    i plan to go on to win this tourney
    you should go back to play with burt n ernie
    cuz you belong on sesame street
    your skills are anything but elite
    so take some advice from a seasoned pro
    to win a rap battle you don't need no damn fro
    alls you need is some nice rhymes inside your brain
    and a hate for your competition like abel n cain
    so you can bail out now and save yourself the shame
    before the joke of 2011 becomes your lame ass name
    Last edited by Bombsaway707; 02-19-2011 at 01:50 PM.

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    Welcome, to the end of your rap career Mr. Bombsaway
    By the time we finished, I’ll have you calling mayday
    Shall we begin? Alright here it goes
    When will it stop nobody knows
    Wait, hold up, rewind
    Lemme infiltrate your mind
    Spinning my webs, like a lyricalist weaver
    Ya I’m ill, but don’t got no fever
    Numb to the world, I don’t feel
    Your a feast, happy meal
    The world spittin out whack MCs
    The days of rap are lookin bleak
    Time to do what I gotta do and kill off the weak
    And this spit got you cut so deep
    But I’m laughing while I watch you bleed
    Cause you’ve been smoked, like weed
    Last edited by Balls Out; 02-20-2011 at 05:28 PM.
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    Checkin in, ill post back tomorrow... too tired to think tonight

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    Haha alright bro, see you tomorrow.
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    This is fucking stupid.

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    Son you've stepped into my home turf, domain
    Dont try and run now your efforts would only be vain
    This rappin shit is just a game to me
    the end of your lyrical life is what the fortune teller forsee
    i know you all be thinking man hes white
    but when you hear me spit you all be real contrite
    people tend to laugh when i tell them i can rap
    but when they hear my rhymes their mouths get stuck like tree sap
    and even though my metaphors may blow your mind
    dont forget to check the rhyme scheme its worth a nice dime
    so thats what im layin down against your rap son
    and how many issues did i have? oh yeah. NONE
    i wouldn't be surprised if you began to suffer a lyrical drought
    your self esteem crumbles and your brain you begin to doubt

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    I don't need no home field advantage
    Just a mic, stage and I'll manage
    Taste the fear in my oppenets heart
    All lights on me, that's when I start
    Spittin these lyrics with uncanny flow
    Lost in the music I let go
    I release the beasts, that I've kept caged
    Tearing up this motherfuckin stage
    Tremendous pressure, when I thrive
    After I finish, you'll be lucky to be alive
    This is more than a game, this is my moment
    Time to show what I got, and go with it
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    Im sorry to tell you this but your words just cant compare
    My rhymes are like a dagger and into your flesh they will tear
    in this battle ill come out the champion easily
    crush your hopes and dreams without leniency
    your competition is nothin but bump in the road
    your very self esteem i will attempt to corrode
    best to just bail out now while you still have your dignity
    before i bash in your brain like im playin on timpani
    my foot on your chest is how this battle will finish
    just battling against me caused your rep to diminish
    upper cut, jaw jab, kidney punch, kick
    seein you after im through is enough to make anyone sick
    so thats what im spittin, i see you quakin in your shoes
    you look a little scared, your face be quite chartreuse
    i crushed you like emperor mao, bombsaway707 be out, ciao
    Last edited by Bombsaway707; 02-20-2011 at 09:04 PM.

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    Dealing with family issues atm, will have my spit tomorrow.
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    Aww hell Yeah this shit is going down





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    Poll added. voting closes in 5 days from now.

    Balls Out did not reply over the time limit (2 days) therefore we moved onto voting - We did not cancel the match entirely because he did state he is having issues.

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    Hey, I'm really sorry I couldn't get to the last rap. If you want me to do it now, I could. My grandfather is dealthy ill, so I had to drive down to FL (10 hours+) and I've been at the assisted living home throughout the past week.
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    If you would like it's fine but you don't have to That's why I opened a poll instead of kicking you out , you have life to deal with.

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    Well, I'm extremely busy right now, so if it's not needed, I'll pass. Sorry for the inconvenience. Good luck Bombs.
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