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    "Smart Ass" Freestyle

    I produce music, and USE to rap but manily gave that up...but hell here ya go with a lil "Keystyle"


    Damaging vital organs Iím extorting entire intestines/

    Digesting broken glass and cyanide to spit homemade weapons/

    Hurling vocals at rivals like debris out of a catapult/

    Slice through your abdomen eat the insides like a cantaloupe/

    Shrink wrap throats with bare hands of deaths grip/

    Entire my ring of fire, let the mass slaughtering commence/

    You just seeing a mere tenth of my rhyming capacity/

    I handle heated shells like a manmade chicken hatchery/

    My battles a debauchery/target practice like archery/

    No kind of jumper cables would dare to start with me/

    Iím the man form of the beast detailed in revelations/

    Tearing down the infrastructure of every modernized nation/

    Dirty like the running water faucets in nap town slums/

    I spit to the fiery beat of native american indian war drums/

    Blades of steel I spit razorblades at will for thrills/

    Deadly with the writing art form, masterful with the quill/




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    I loved the beginning lyrics about the eating the abdomen. It reminds me of Slim's, Back in the day music. Nice freestyle.

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    Last couple of lines were boss. Nice freestyle
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    thank you guys, might post others seeing how theres a crowd for it