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    A poem I came across

    Here it is:

    suicide, suicide in my head,
    suicide, suicide i'm nearly dead,
    suicide, suicide my wrists are cut,
    suicide, suicide i know i'm morally unwell.

    suicide, suicide still in my head,
    suicide, suicide the razors red,
    suicide, suicide my hands dread,
    suicide, suicide i know i'm morally unwell.


    suicide, suicide prevailing in my head,
    suicide, suicide the beginning of life,
    suicide, suicide the end of sorrow,
    suicide, suicide the end of pain.

    suicide, suicide in my head,
    suicide, suicide c'mon pull the trigger,
    suicide, suicide im dead,
    suicide, suicide i know i'm morally unwell.

    and this one:

    Suicide, suicide
    Your presence is near
    Suicide, suicide
    I wish you were here
    Suicide, suicide
    Take me away
    Suicide, suicide
    Please make it today
    Suicide, suicide
    An answer, for me
    Suicide, suicide
    I need to escape, be free
    Suicide, suicide
    I’ve had too much
    Suicide, suicide
    Take me, do your touch
    Suicide, suicide
    Leave the rest behind
    Suicide, suicide
    You’re all over my mind
    Suicide, suicide
    Let me pass in peace
    Suicide, suicide
    I need to release


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    Seems like an Emo/Peace poem. Since it's technically about killing yourself but it has peace sayings and wanting to be free.
    Nice poem.

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    Last edited by Margherita; 03-20-2011 at 07:16 AM.

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    lol bumps are a month now, no worries.


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    Needs the word suicide about 80 more times.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post
    Needs the word suicide about 80 more times.
    agreed, not enough on there... needs to make the reader WANT to suicide lol


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    Umm, quite unique?

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