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    My nab rap

    Uhm, dont go to hard on me


    Yeah,
    Im here to play, to play , to play
    The game comes easy, my rhymes like weezy
    No prob to make a line, no prob to rap a rhyme,
    When i hit this beat, it will feel so good,
    All my homies will dance in the hood
    Time to show , how i flo
    If u think ill let ya know how i got so fly
    I guess ur high, Ill never tell u, why before i die

    Listen playas
    My rap is the shit
    u all know ill be the next hit
    Trust me homie im not playin
    Im just sayin
    I am the next 50
    Get ur rap right, campared to me ur beats so shitty

    Yeah , cuuuuuz
    2pac comes back
    trough my voice
    with my rhymes
    my lines
    my flo
    and u know
    I am so pro
    And everybody go
    like yo, Eazy-Me u are the best, u make rap , standing out from the rest

    But i aint here to brag , you already know i got swag

    Peace out , haha
    Last edited by matrin12; 03-09-2011 at 08:03 PM.

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    No offense, but this rap sucked. Lmao

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    Worth a try But i give up now ^^ Was bored and read trough the forum. SO i tries myself x)

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    man, work on your metaphors, and punchlines...u get 1/5 mics for trying




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    Okai, ill try ^^

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    not soo good sorry
    inFAMOUS
    It is the best game

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    "Yeah , cuuuuuz
    2pac comes back
    trough my voice
    with my rhymes
    my lines
    my flo
    and u know
    I am so pro
    And everybody go
    like yo, Eazy-Me u are the best, u make rap , standing out from the rest"

    That whole section was weak. Work on this.
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    MARGHERITA