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    a special poem for a special somebody



    poop by austin
    my poop, how brown you look
    floating at the top of my toilet bowl
    your fresh odour and ridged texture
    how i envy your entry to the nether
    for this is my good-bye, dearest friend
    i hope to meet you once again



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    Austin, I applaud your interest in literary art and further encourage you to enhance your skills, it was a great first poem! Congrats!

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    MARGHERITA

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    Quote Originally Posted by Coeus View Post
    Austin, I applaud your interest in literary art and further encourage you to enhance your skills, it was a great first poem! Congrats!
    why thank you alen it means a lot to me



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    Quote Originally Posted by Saboteur View Post


    why thank you alen it means a lot to me
    hey can u thank me because ur thank post is =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by filip1999 View Post
    hey can u thank me because ur thank post is =)
    why would i want to thank you? and get on topic.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Saboteur View Post
    why thank you alen it means a lot to me
    I am sure others are of the same opinion as well

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    My my, You're just a regular Robert Frost aren't ya?
    I love the extended metaphor used to describe your friend and the journey you two have taken into worlds beyond! It is quite touching and as Alen has stated I encourage you to persevere in your new endeavor of poetry creation!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Evelyn View Post
    My my, You're just a regular Robert Frost aren't ya?
    I love the extended metaphor used to describe your friend and the journey you two have taken into worlds beyond! It is quite touching and as Alen has stated I encourage you to persevere in your new endeavor of poetry creation!
    why thank you evelyn, that means a lot.



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    AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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    This touched me deeply.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Coke View Post
    This touched me deeply.

    i think everybody feels that way.



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    how sweet .

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    I cried, just lovely

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