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    My first rap

    7 AM, waking up in the morning
    Gotta be fresh, gotta go downstairs
    Gotta have mah bowl, gotta have cereal
    Seein' everythang da time is goin'
    Ticking on and on, everybody's Russian
    Gotta get down to da bus stop.
    Gotta catch my bus, I see my friends

    Kickin' in the front seat
    Sittin' in the back seat
    Gotta make my mind up baby, which seat can I take?

    It's VENDREDI, VENDREDI, gotta get down on vendredi
    Everybody's looking forward to the weekend
    Vendredi, vendredi, gettin' down on Vendredi
    Everybody's looking forward to da weekend

    Raving, raving yeah
    Raving, raving yeah
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    So what do you guys think?

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    Pretty nice, keep up the good work.

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    where are the rhymes?
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    hahah

    lol thats from rebecca black you liar.... shame shame

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    i like it. can you sing it out loud and record it? i'll help you auto tune it to ultimate perfection.


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    Ehhhh nigga this shit weak ahah but keep trying homie practice is where its =)

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    Shag, leave. And OP leave, this is Rebecca Black's terrible, terrible song.
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    He used rebecca black's friday and edited a little and you say its so nice...
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    I mean, I would rather see the OP make a rap of his own rather than a somewhat plagarized parody.
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    Nigga I ain't gotta leave Ur a scrub n ill smash u in a rap all I was saying to the kid was to keep practicing that's it

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    I don't do rap battles anymore, they are a fairly pointless musical skill.
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    Hah cuz u were never good at rap or anything in that nature Ur garbage kid just face it ha

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    Haha definently bro. So tell me how you afford internet services on welfare?
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    :P I come from Quebec we speak french and I understand the word Vendredi
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