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    CnC Please

    What do you think about it and CnC please.

    I don't really like the render but I didn't find any thing else.
    I think it is Zeus



     
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    It's a bit blurry (e)_(e)

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    @Takari IMO the text actually fits the smudge but find a better render because this one is low quality and blurry. You should try making the text just a little bit bigger.
    Also, it looks like you have multiple light sources, that's bad. Make only one light source, I'd suggest you make the light coming from above.
    I like the effects overall, it's good.

    EDIT: Noticed now, wrong section, this goes to the Showroom. You're lucky cuz Ryguy's inactive...
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    Hmm yeah im going to ignore that this is in the wrong section and just help you with this.

    -The background is too low quality/blurry
    -text is somewhat placed right, but executed poorly.
    -The render is NOT Zeus lol...Just some anime chick.
    -The render just looks slapped on without any effort of integrating it.

    Still needs work.

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    Opps sorry.
    I had 2 tabs open one with Graphic Design and another with Showcase.

    Thanks , what render do you recommend to use for the Greek Meth SOTW that fits the type of signature.

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    It was written that it is Zeus



     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Takari View Post
    Opps sorry.
    I had 2 tabs open one with Graphic Design and another with Showcase.

    Thanks , what render do you recommend to use for the Greek Meth SOTW that fits the type of signature.

    @Faux
    It was written that it is Zeus
    probably just a character in an Anime that is named Zeus. Try something along the lines of Poseidon, or even Hades. Those are really good characters to use for the theme.

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    The image and other effects are nice, but as the others stated before the render is bad quality.
    Last edited by Jack Sparrow; 06-20-2011 at 05:19 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Faux View Post
    -The render is NOT Zeus lol...Just some anime chick.
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    i thought it was a dude?

    the focal is EXTREMELY low quality and doesnt blend with the background at all.
    you have no lighting or blending, but you have a nice background. next time work on blending your focal and background

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    That background is fucking awesome but that render is too blurry and you can barely make out what it is if you dont have good vision